FastSquirrel622
Death is a salvation and life is a gift. If you are given a chance to get any of them don't miss it or you'll regret.but don't ever try to reject one for the other or again you'll regret it.
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I think you mixed up names from another one of your Fics here
I get you on that as I also am unable to find time to write chps for my fanfic. If anyone wants you can read the 4 chps I've uploaded it's name is "Spirit of Vengeance in One Piece" please advise me and give me ideas for new chapters thank you all in advance
has your problem with patreon got solved ??
WHERE WERE YOU ALL THIS TIME MY FRIEND 😭😭😭😭😭
Yo! I think you have some misunderstanding as Hancock isn't the owner of the auction house but Miss Medusa and why does she have Hancock's fruit? well she was the owner of the fruit before Hancock. I think this should clear it up. -------------Squirrel Out
Thank you my friend for pointing out the mistakes. I have corrected them Thank you and as always advice and suggestions are always welcome
make the staff a secret as it will be odd for him and let the staff have a shapeshift function like changing into a ring or tatoo you can also use tatoo for hiding the wings if you like or if it's helpful please respond to my both comments and update faster. ---squirrel out
you should insert an evolution element for example first a normal angel with basic powers then leader angel then angel commander then arch angel etc give him more powers with every evolution and his wings number and size should increase with each evolution and you should also consider his body size when increasing wings length because it doesn't make sense his wings are the same size from start till end even if he is a normal angel you should give a range (min size - Max size) for every evolution. ---squirrel out