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Leave it dude. He said he only here for fun. There are better authors out there searching for feedbacks even in WebNovel writing fanfics while wanted to genuinely improve their quality and performance and maybe even become professionals. Don't waste your time arguing pointless matters.
Yeh bro it seems so and unlike noob authors here he seemed to consciously took that decision
Good Book. Definitely worth the while. Author took a couple of unique directions with the same 'extra' plot, but nonetheless unique. MC is the best part of the book. Cool headed, intelligent, cold at times, and most importantly not annoying. Some decent side charcters, but mostly commonly read types, but doesn't discount you with them. Little Spoiler : Currently there usual Academy Disaster event is about to happen, I am looking forward to how the Author gonna deal it. And I will be able judge the book even better after that. Oh, by the way, some cool circumstances have cooked up 😉 untill now Author. The Demon Contract thing, His family issues, Even his ability. They are the best part of novel. Anyway, all the best.
Oh, he is not using Nasa'a name I guess. But i also like his family though.
...well righteous I guess
And you say his is still dumb bro😒
Absolutely 5★ from me. One of The best written OC's I have seen in a Naruto Fic. Just loving it. Definitely not like any of those Chinese TL you will find. The Plot is Unique. Which like totally rare. Nonetheless the novel is still in pretty early stages. Looking forward to see how the Author manages the Uchiha Massicure. If the Author was able to do atleast better then usual garbaged up scenario where MC simply not available at that particular time, I will be satifsfied. Happy if did better. All the best Author! (Don't make it Harem though)
I understand he is missing 'love' in his acting. But I am surprised Drake couldn't point it out though. I mean isn't it simple as the script inspired was from his own life? Well maybe he lacks the ability to Direct his actors.
He can't swim right?
He is a Guy right?
Chapter was okay.But worse presentation I have seen, especially for the first chapter.Do more editing. I mean the normal document format will correct the mistake the author made. It is the least effort one could put.Also stop the bold format l and if possible the caps also
For a second I thought you are gonna say some inspiring story about a Professor showing a effective path to a student. My bad. I should have to have thought otherwise when you said Engineering student in India(:I am one to - Hyderabad)Anyways Love your Novel. Great Work.