Comparing yamamoto to the 3rd hokage is so disrespectful.

Mjolnir isn't even his weapon, and the weapon that define him is gungnir.🙃😮‍💨

Ah yes typical Chinese mc, mf can u just change his attitude. Might as well claim the entire fanfic and change this stoopid plot.

Disappointed in the mc acting like a Chinese arrogant young master

Adding so many unnecessary servants to his league made this more complicated. Instead of focusing and delving more into his life, you transported him into another world, making the story all over the place.🙄😮‍💨

The clones brought more depth and life to the story, dispelling them kinda ruined the story for me.😮‍💨🙃

Making it more complicated than it already is

Dude is the representation of the line 'I Can Fix Her'

Hate apathetic mc

What's the point in making a fanfic if your mc is just a side character

Looks like the mc will be a side character in this fanfic

Making such a weak mc in the dbz universe is incredibly boring

The dude can't have a nice reward

Please not romance.let it be a harem than letting saya be the fl. I hate how you always focus on her, like she's the most annoying character in HOTD

The quality just got drop-down

Why is he acting like a kid?

It's so unnecessary to remove his vampire bloodline. Can't you just fuse it

If you are so easily irritated, why even bother to go to school?

Ben cooper? Really dude, of all the name in the world you choose this?

Nerfing