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Hello! I'm A! I have a passion for writing and will write multiple stories in the future Stories I have published: -T.V.I.L

2022-04-27 JoinedGlobal
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  • Ayi_SYA
    Ayi_SYA1yr
    Replied to samsara

    I think it falls into both categories as what he is doing is shameless and yet idiotic

    "I am Shiraishi Aoki, and with all due respect, everyone here is rubbish."
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    In Naruto: Sacrificing EQ for Talent Points
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    Ayi_SYA1yr
    Replied to

    I am only an editor of the original I may change some parts of the story at one point, I don't think I could change that fact though I don't exactly like the future of the original but thanks for the advice I may keep it in mind

    "I am Shiraishi Aoki, and with all due respect, everyone here is rubbish."
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  • Ayi_SYA
    Ayi_SYA1yr
    Commented

    I've edited it as the grammar, names and some other details weren't correct

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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  • Ayi_SYA
    Ayi_SYA1yr
    Posted

    Information about the world is wrong and I dont like the attitude of the mc the grammar and descriptions arent that great I could barely read it and I gave up sorry author

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    Avatar: the wishes
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    Ayi_SYA1yr
    Commented

    Author are you gonna update soon?

    Ch 19 The Patient, The Hungry, And The Song Of The Dead
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    All That Was Lost [MHA]
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    Ayi_SYA1yr
    Commented

    Some info should be wrong as senju tobirama was never have been said tp use it the first earliest user was might duy and even then there are only 3 other users of the technique as shown in the anime naruto and boruto as well as another person using something similar cultivating the 8 gates isnt something anyone can do or would and the reason the 8th gate leads to death is because it is located at the heart leading to death after use

    Ch 52 Chapter 52
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    Time control in naruto
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    Ayi_SYA1yr
    Commented

    Is this like copied but with a few differences and like shorter? It seems like it

    Ch 2 Joining Phantom troupe...
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    HxH: Reborn as Illumi with Gojos abilities
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    Ayi_SYA1yr
    Commented

    Finally someone who could make use of the wishes

    Ch 1 Meeting an Actual R.O.B
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    God Tier Uchiha- OP Naruto fanfic
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  • Ayi_SYA
    Ayi_SYA1yr
    Commented

    Im pretty sure this isn't how the law works, lawyers are open minded people who try to do the best for their client so even if they know the client is guilty they wouldnt tell. The fact that the friends all betrayed him for no reason makes no sense as well since they could just blame a person they dont know for that matter and im pretty sure even if the president commits things like he would probs get arrested for multiple charges. The story in here is unrealistic even if one of the friends father is influential or a police chief or smth like that they could actually still get arrested because of the law. Some people make judges unfair but they are trained to look at all evidence and give a reasonable sentence as well as be fair to the person accused. It is possible thpugh for a judge to be corrupt but that is pretty rare as they are trained to abide the law no matter what. This is just my opinion and one can improve so make things a bit more realostic sometimes

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 Betrayal
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    Reincarnated as Sasuke Uchiha in MHA
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    Ayi_SYA1yr
    Commented

    Im pretty sure sasuke is older than naruto by a few months and that itachi and alex is supposed to be 5 years older not hating just stating

    Ch 5 Chapter 5
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    The Might Of A True Uchiha {Completed}
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  • Ayi_SYA
    Ayi_SYA1yr
    Commented

    MC is super talented bro like gon and killua needed to face malicious nen to forcefully open their aura nodes if they did what MC did it would take a week as theorised by wing

    Ch 2 Awakening I
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    My Researching Journey (HxH)
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