Keith_Williams_0574

There is a large portion towards the end of the chapter titled "Raid" that's untranslated.

The story started out pretty good as a rebuilding of an empire type story then halfway through it became a technical dissertation for a doctorate in quantum engineering. I know the MC has to rebuild the technology he created in the future, but this is just ridiculous.

It was decent, but there are chunks of the chapter that are not translated.

I binged this over the last day and I really enjoyed what you did here. Kind of sad we missed out on the R-18 content, especially with Cardi and her sister, but after a certain point I didn't even notice it anymore. I hope there's more to come because I've loved the journey so far.

I think this is probably the fourth NCIS story that I've ever read. I'm loving the world that you're building around Alex and his backstory. I feel kind of iffy about the cliche childhood, but everything else is amazing.