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this is how a fic should be. not because its too good but the characters feel alive. its (mc) a bit too passive for me (i personally like evil, antihero mc) but, he does take revenge and i think is bidding for the right time. for the harem, although its a bit forced the author does gives a somewhat reasonable explanation (i convinced myself a bit) but overall the storyline is great the mc doesn't join the shrenks or spirit hall, anyway keep it up author i have great expectations.
one of the best HP novel i have read. the magic melodies was brilliant, the only reason for 4 star was because the MC is a pacifist. he doesn't fight back, even when him or his parents were insulted when they throw spells at him and even when he's called a traitor, all he does is use his mouth, and it got to the point where I can't stand it so regretfully I am dropping this here.
I don't know much as I have only read up to 17ch's. the story line is good but, the authors skills aren't good enough is make it happen, it may improve further into the story. and another thing is harem, it is forced and the women do not have enough character development, the author time skiped the place where there should have been development and, I think there are too much women in harem, It should be at most 5 or 6 but there are already 4 women by the 17th chapter.
a smile that every man knows