Deztopia

Hey author, don't care about this mongrels barking. If you listen opinion without constructive critic, u are idiot. You can't shut someone else's mouth even if they're talking shit. Good luck in life and writing.

This is a translation, and the original was finished a long time ago

dude, your story is good, but the text looks like generated AI, I advise you to revive it and diversify it, and try to avoid monotony and tautology