_Dais
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former military turned writer. the kind of guy that can read a chapter then realize i didn't actually read it and have to go back to the beginning
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_Dais1yrReplied to Daoistwaterdroplol u right, i gotchu
Character Drawings. (not done)- _Dais1yrReplied to _Dais
artist IG: @a.suppa_art
Character Drawings. (not done) - _Dais1yrReplied to Mistrui
yes, though might i add that many ancient societies have a similar theory. this is a combination of the greek phalanx and the roman ideals of the unit being more important than the individual
Khalid continued. "They art revered because they art the perfect phalanx. They don't see themselves as individuals but as part of something else, something greater. They were trained to operate in a close formation and never break, even if they were sure of impending death." - _Dais1yrReplied to Mistrui
that's a good parallel, yes
Often they could pair a shield with their weapon arts due to magic that bonded the shield to their bracer and allowed both hands to be free for the spear. - _Dais1yrCommented
Goleil - concept art
Character Drawings. (not done) - _Dais1yrReplied to bulcan300
like Ready Player One?
Furthermore, according to last year's gaming report, at least half of the world's population is a virtual gamer! - _Dais1yrReplied to KornKobCh 55 What is Death? (2)
- _Dais1yrReplied to Funwagen44Ch 54 What is Death? (1)
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this sentence struck me as weird, so ive edited it :)
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corpse*
Aldrich climbed the stairs and then he came about three corps two husks and one human. Aldrich to make use of them again, it worked last time so why not. - _Dais1yrCommented
bit of a miss-type here
The was was a very real sword through him and yet there was not even a scratch to prove it. Aldrich found himself completely naked and laying on a dusty wooden floor. - _Dais1yrCommented
meat hammer*
Aldrich left the bone hammer in the common room just in case he need it. He walked slowly up the steps that lead to the source of the insistent noise. The noise was already testing his patience. - _Dais1yrCommented
ten minutes is a very long time to be silent
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you should shorten these paragraphs, readers tend to dislike longer ones like these
Aurora Kholin, of House Kholin was the daughter of a beggar and one of the poorest men in Maldonia. Even though Maldonia was glamorous and cheerful from the outside, the new comers didn't have that much luck being successful in Maldonia. Many became servants to the nobles and rich men of Maldonia, they worked in houses which had huge armies in the support of the throne. These outlanders got married and had kids, these kids produced a whole new generation of people who went on to serve the King and his nobilities ─ hence that will explain how Aurora Kholin, of House Kholin came to serve the crowned prince of Maldonia.