Well, After your comment I added title to it.

Author-san are you Indian?. Ummm~I suggest you use the quill editing app. It can help you to fix grammar in one click and also you can paraphrase it. Although you will get only standard and fluency mode in the free version it's good and also use the Grammarly app after editing with quill app. You can also find out your summary of the whole chapter and many more. Thank you. Remember it's quill not quick, and try to use it through Google, don't download the app as it's crashed many times.

well, I am not a senior😄, now I remember it, I have read your love for yandere fanfictions about a months ago and good to know, that you are the same author.

Thanks for reading it.

Tbh, after watching your fanfic I got a little demotivated or felt inferior as I was also writing a demon slayer fanfic. I mean you are way too professional, in writing skills and many more. your story has great potential and I hope you will continue it. Go forward Author-san. ( mind if you motivate me a little 🙃 )

No problem, you remind me of my little brother, so I dont mind helping you.

choose a novel with good writing quality and grammar and used it as a reference to your novel. I mean, you should watch the writing of the novel and try to copy it. For example, you wrote ‘ the sun is shining in the sky ' while the other wrote ‘ the sun is hung high in the sky, shone down on the whole village'. So you should replace your writing with the other one. Which looks good and fits your novel. You can also read the reaction of the character and try to use it in your novel. This will be copied at first but as time flies, you will gain a lot of experience. it's not like you are copying their whole story. And use the quill editing app, I will recommend you to use this app through google as the app will lag sometimes.

No need to thanked me, I am also an Indian.

Hello, my lovely Indian. You should use quill editing app for paragraph editing. It can edit your paragraph and will also fix grammar errors. unlike Grammarly, you can fix all grammar with just one click, but I will recommend you to use both apps. Or you can google it. Best of luck.

You are right, but how should I explain it to you, as it will take too much time for me to write. Well, he isn't looking at the world simply as we look and seeing something different than usual ( as it was nature sense ability, I am trying to familiarise him with the nature and show something different that normal people couldn't able to see ) And for the tress, In anime most of the trees look the same as the others, I mean you can watch demon slayer training episode, where Urokodaki took Tanjiro to cut the boulder, the trees around him almost look the same. thanks for the comment, have a great day.

I don't mind. I should ask you before using the lines as you are the CEO of ‘ line company '.👍

This scene resembles me of lord krishna. When he hide the clothes of the girls.

such a shame🙁.

Wow!, after a long time, I find a potential danmachi fic. Writing quality is also good for me as my native isn't English, and I didn't need a god-level grammar. *sigh...I just hope, one day my writing skills will at your level. And yeah nothing to say, as there are only a few chapters uploaded and yeah author did you use any app for editing grammar or paraphrasing the paragraph Go forward Author-san.

Is it dropped or something, I am starting to like this story. I hope the story will continue. ....... ........ .. ........... ...

My dad is too strong.

Friend use the quill editing app, it might help you with paraphrasing editing and also with grammar, summary and many more. it's just that you will get only two options in phrase editing standard and fluency. If you wanted to go further high, then you have to buy its premium version, which is around 700 Indian rupees. Dhanyabad.

Ummm~its seems like Author-san sure has read ‘ Naruto- the great swordsman ' from Navyking. I guess. ( I didn't remember the name clearly ) well, it's only a few chapters, there isn't much development, but surely in the future and I hope you will execute it properly. writing quality is ok(good) for me as my native isn't English, so I didn't need a God-level grammar. And best of luck, I will wait for more chapters to come. sorry brother, for not giving a 5 star as the story has still a long way to go.

kny fanfics? there are only a few completed kny fanfics there. Even less than my 5 fingers. Your story look kinda nice, I am gonna read it.

well, its not a devil fruit. But yeah, I will surely write a backstory about the sword and the fruit.