hritick_nk
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yo author we know mc is tuff and ruthless overcame all the hurdles and i personally appreciate it but the thing i hate the most is you explaining about mc growth, his mindset, his backstory, him challenging heaven and earth for every five chapters and in some chapters the story is not even progressing it only contains you over highlighting mc as if you are somekind of pervert (like you can't write story with out telling your opinion on mc's every decision)stop it ,it's so cringe and creepy story is good challenging heaven and earth is new and exited for what comes after 10rank[img=update]