LoukasP
I am but a shell of human nature that watches on as the world speeds by. I am disgusted yet proud of everything that I have and haven't done, and it is with a heavy heart that I watch on.
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LoukasP1mthReplied to CornyChiWAH"...Perhaps." Getting a glare for his flippant answer, Nezu sighs before giving a proper one. "Yes, though once we get back I plan to. Though I'll be prioritizing Todoroki and Midoriya."- LoukasP1mthCommented
I'm assuming most of the souls' games would fit this bill?
Grimdark (+3) — A world that is actively undergoing some sort of widespread catastrophe. Alien invasion, nuclear war, natural disasters, and the like will be happening nigh-constantly, shattering what little status quo is able to form. Death, danger, corruption, and the like presses in from every direction, as things tend to just get worse regardless of effort. Very few verses are like this, and for good reason. - LoukasP2mthPosted
So, first thing's first, I'm at chap 11(that's all there is), and it's pretty good. so far, the MC, a man reborn in an AU original timeline, is consistent with what his character has been predetermined to be, and the fights don't feel drawn out. The writing is good for webnovel standards; I don't see too many inconsistencies. All in all, it's got a good start and a lot of potential.
- LoukasP2mthCommented"When the leaves of that tree dry up, I will die..." A thirteen-year-old boy with a sickly complexion and straight hair named Dash looked at the Sakura tree with bitter memories.
- LoukasP2mthCommentedIt grants relief to those who are tired. Maybe many hate it, but it is..... inevitable.
- LoukasP2mthCommented
idk why, but I originally read that as comrad.
3. Conrad's Defense> - LoukasP2mthReplied to IFuckedJadeBeauty
this doesn't fit at all... and I love it.🤣
"So thank you for allowing me to play games and stream, doc. I hope I can enjoy it in my next life. Maybe the breeze will bring me some hope. Hahaha." - LoukasP2mthReplied to VastoLordMask
commrad!
As they vaulted the last hill, they finally were able to see the castle, and what a castle it was. Before them stood a spectacle that defied imagination. An architectural marvel, loomed large against the backdrop of the Wolfswood. Its towers reached for the sky, taller than any tower Rickard had ever seen, adorned with intricate designs that he was sure even the King would be jealous of. The walls were made of stone that seemed impervious, and banners with an unfamiliar sigil fluttered proudly in the breeze. (Comment sigil ideas, as well as house names and words, I am always open to ideas) - LoukasP2mthReplied to The_Rune_Raven
I reversed image searched, but I wasn't able to come across any anime or game with this insignia. I was able to, however, come across this name: Insignia Demon Enoch. I put this here in case you wanna look on your own. Goodluck
As they vaulted the last hill, they finally were able to see the castle, and what a castle it was. Before them stood a spectacle that defied imagination. An architectural marvel, loomed large against the backdrop of the Wolfswood. Its towers reached for the sky, taller than any tower Rickard had ever seen, adorned with intricate designs that he was sure even the King would be jealous of. The walls were made of stone that seemed impervious, and banners with an unfamiliar sigil fluttered proudly in the breeze. (Comment sigil ideas, as well as house names and words, I am always open to ideas) - LoukasP2mthCommentedCh 1 Welcome To Duel Academy!
- LoukasP7mthReplied to Jejeyy
is there a reason you ask?
Limping down a hall, Ragnarok took a right turn. He dragged open a small doggy door and pulled something out by his teeth. A book and pen fell to the floor as he let them drop. It fell open to a blank page and he picked up the pen in his mouth. - LoukasP7mthReplied to DragonslayerKnight
bro, calm down. did this guy murder your family or something? it's a piece of fiction, we come here to escape from nonexistent freedom of our lives; I don't see the need to get so worked up over something you can stop reading. if it's bad, it's bad. you don't need to flame someone for attempting to write; it is a very strenuous task. Look, all I'm sayin' is give constructive criticism why you don't like something and leave it. you don't need to sound like you're blowing a casket.
- LoukasP7mthCommented
the math's not mathing
I ended up bying 35% of the company, in other words I invested/paid 17.5 billion dollars in this huge project. It is the biggest share making me the one with the highest control and authority in the company. The other men had 23%, 17% while the last one has 15%. - LoukasP7mthReplied to Jejeyy
my discord is - loukasp
Limping down a hall, Ragnarok took a right turn. He dragged open a small doggy door and pulled something out by his teeth. A book and pen fell to the floor as he let them drop. It fell open to a blank page and he picked up the pen in his mouth. - LoukasP7mthPosted
writing quality: While it's not as good as it could be, I strive to make it better than 99% of stories on this site. I will miss quite a bit because I'm still a student, and I have a lot to learn. I will promise to, at least, run chapters through something like grammarly, so I don't have any spelling errors, though. Story development: This has a generic start, but so does every other book/novel out there. it's how you make it unique that matters, and I think my story will be fairly unique. Character Design: I hope that my characters will never be anything less than alive, and I'm actively scared of it doing so. I have taken nessisary precautions, however, in order to keep them alive Update Stability: While it's a chapter every 1-2 day right now, once chapter 10 hits I will switch over to 1 a week. I'm doing this to stockpile for if anything special happens and to give myself some leniency if I ever fall sick or the like. I will say, however, that once I stockpile a decent amount, I will start to up the chapters a week. in return for quantity, I give quality, which is much more important to me. World Background: I hope this will be flushed out as time goes on, for I don't want to give large info dumps. Instead, my aim is to let you experience this world. lastly, this is a skill system. There are no stats or anything, and the main focus isn't the system. if you spot any errors in the chaps or want to help out, I will post a discord soon. please ask any questions in the comments bellow, thanks.
- LoukasP8mthCommented"Time for plan B. 'Join' team Galactic."
- LoukasP8mthReplied to Slushy_ApolloWithout hesitation, he quickly came up with the names 'Goburus' for his Sycthelord Goblin and 'Gobulus' for his Shadow Blade Goblin.
- LoukasP8mthCommentedI may have been a baby, but I could see the way he'd look at the maids and his wife. Like me, he was a man of good taste. He loved breasts, the left one in particular like me, and I even caught him trying some of Mom's milk.
- LoukasP8mthCommented
the best pokemon in existence... Roggenrola
If you have any ideas for the story let me know in the comments down below. I have some of it planned out but I welcome any suggestions. I don't really have a full team in mind yet so leave your pokemon suggestions in the comments. No legendaries pls lol.