Translations are pretty hard to understand, also a lot of mistakes between "he” and "she" makes it difficult to know which character is being mentioned. Try to anonce where the part is taking place since is sounds like you're jumping all around.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

novelhall, the story here I think is just a better translation, I've read the original and is a bit confusing since is not original in English

I've only just started to read this one, so far I wanna say I love it. it is very good how you the author describe so well the characters, what they're wearing, and their expressions. a few grammatical erros but a whole lot less than most other stories I have read. I'm in chapter 8 and I cannot seem to put it down, the setting, the different backgrounds, it is all so intriguing and I can't wait to read more. awsome job to the author, I will definitely read more of your books, and if there are continuations of this one I will read them as well.

still learning how the app works, is a bit annoying not being able to read because of I sufficient points, coins or whatever is called...... however this story is the first I started reading in this app and kudos for the writer is really good..... to those who have more points to spend I suggest you read this story as well

the points stuff, is a pain in my rear; still learning the lingo of this app. the story on the other hand; is really good I wanna keep reading, is really good.

I read too fast in maybe 1-2 hrs I read all the unlocked chapters, is a good read only downside is this app and it doesn't even worth spending money, I'd rather use ireader or Galatea, there are easier, better, faster ways to earn points and I've spent a few bucks on a book in those other apps, heck even prime has better prices. I started reading this one on wattpad, should've stuck to that app. Some of those books have been published and made to movies by Netflix now. Think about it for the next time. Again this book so far it's really good, I'm really enjoying the read, just not the wait.

Same here, this is a good read

Same here, not a fan of the coin system, though the story is interesting.

I'm really liking the story I started reading on wattpad. What I'm not liking is the expense that needs to be made in order to read ahead more. I will be patient, I really want to get to the end.

Hi, great story! I started reading on wattpad and I couldn't stop. Is different and very entertaining. Can't wait to continue reading the next books as well.