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Oooh I feel like this vampire will end up being another subordinate.[img=coins]

Writing quality 5 - i like the writing styleStory development 5 - story is looking goodCharacter design 6 if possible 😶‍🌫️Updating stability 3 needs improvementWorld background 4Overall, i love it. a good read.

Thank you very much for sharing your opinion, this is my very first novel, and I am learning more because of you people and your advices.

Thank you very much for sharing your opinion, I am learning more because of you people and your advices.

thankyou very much for your opinion, i'll work on my pov more carefully.

Sorry for the late reply, I am currently working on the chapters so please stay tuned because there will be a whole lot of interesting plots and stories to enjoy!