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Kevin_Moyer_574810dReplied to LeBronJames23fair enough. they never seem to exist when they could really help with immersion.
But Su Yu had one hundred billion spiritual energy coins! There was nothing money couldn't solve.- Kevin_Moyer_574810dCommented
what?
.43 dollars! - Kevin_Moyer_574812dCommented
um...did someone forget to imput the money amounts here?
"Ding, your bank card with the tail number 3831 has been credited with $0.00 and currently has a balance of $0.00." - Kevin_Moyer_574812dCommented
ok so I'm still trying to figure out if the copy/replica here is just a mistranslation of field boss or something else. it keeps coming up so it gradually got me confused.
"I instead have some hope that he won't be able to beat the replica ... tsk, I really want to see his expression after being brutally beaten." - Kevin_Moyer_574819dCommented
thought it was 10 billion. the novel title as well as the last chapter suggest such.
But Su Yu had one hundred billion spiritual energy coins! There was nothing money couldn't solve. - Kevin_Moyer_57481mthCommented
is this oron?
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ok no problem. I wish you all the best.[img=recommend]
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not trying to sound offensive, but it looks like you could use an english editor or proof reader. I get that it is hard to find a good one, but it's just a thought. the only hiccups in your story look like either translation problems or grammar issues. otherwise your story is awesome and fun.
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thought the plan was for Ent to fight the walking strawberry? here it says the cocoa bean.
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thank you.
"Clear" - Kevin_Moyer_57481mthReplied to GreatDaoofspace
nice. [img=recommend] at least now I don't feel like it's a translation error.
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just making sure but is this supposed to be an affirmation like "yes, yep, or okay"?
"Clear" - Kevin_Moyer_57481mthCommented
so is this confirmation that the MC is gay? Not that I mind, just curious.
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gun?
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you forgot some zeros.
After killing 50,000 burrow monsters at the burrow passage, Qin Feng's merit score reached 35 points. - Kevin_Moyer_57481mthCommented
so far the only problem I have with this novel is the excessive switch from third-person to first-person perspectives and back again.
Looking up, I saw a little girl with a huge rucksack, using both hands and feet, climbing on a big tree. - Kevin_Moyer_57485mthCommented
I'm hoping that was supposed to be "hopes" not "holes".
"We're placing our holes in you two, don't let us down." Gideon and Victoria looked deeply at each other before smiling as well. - Kevin_Moyer_57485mthCommented
wasn't this 750 a chapter or 2 ago?
[AP: 700] - Kevin_Moyer_57485mthCommented
so is green "rare" or "uncommon"?
From the defense of Darkstone campaign, the haul included 1,733 white common-grade equipment pieces, 566 green rare-grade items, 227 blue unique-grade ones, and a staggering 17 purple epic-grade equipment pieces! - Kevin_Moyer_57485mthReplied to Oleanderr0
no problem. just trying to help
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