Kevin_Moyer_5748

think there is an extra star. Just saying.

fair enough. they never seem to exist when they could really help with immersion.

what?

um...did someone forget to imput the money amounts here?

ok so I'm still trying to figure out if the copy/replica here is just a mistranslation of field boss or something else. it keeps coming up so it gradually got me confused.

thought it was 10 billion. the novel title as well as the last chapter suggest such.

is this oron?

ok no problem. I wish you all the best.[img=recommend]

not trying to sound offensive, but it looks like you could use an english editor or proof reader. I get that it is hard to find a good one, but it's just a thought. the only hiccups in your story look like either translation problems or grammar issues. otherwise your story is awesome and fun.

thought the plan was for Ent to fight the walking strawberry? here it says the cocoa bean.