Director_Kun
Just someone making a story that has no attention. My other stuff Fanfiction.net: Director Kun Scribblehub: Director Kun SpaceBattles: Director Kun
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The chapter has a lot of potential, has a lot of issues but it’s fine all you need is an editor. Proof reading your work is a great way to fix a lot of problems with your story. Don’t worry with time you’ll get better at writing. Sadly I do not follow this advice myself.