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oh i know a show, simillar to this one...

i got a better one . . .

wanna see heart?

what i am saying is it's not enough....

what a stupid question . . .

a yandere one. and with a lot of backstory in initial chapters as a storytelling. it could've better to just start from that backstory. does'nt matter for now cause only 12 chapters released but if this backstory countinued for many chapters, it gives same feeling as 'i started gaining sentience in an eroge' but a bit faster storytelling. plot- 4.6/5 (not fully explained yet but promising) writing quality+charater design- 4.85/5 (full potential, no gaps left to question, no mistake found) world background- not discussed yet.(he's still in his room for 12 chapters) updates- i hope it atleast have 2 chaoters every week unlike that one i talked above with 1-2 chapters per month

can he stop with 'she's mine' stuff? like, when does cucks owns anything? it ain't convincing till he get the revenge....

what a lamenting shit the mc is. some things in this chapter if imagined, will be totally creepy AF. when's someone decides something for revenge, he never think about how the other person betrayed him. what he thinks is how and to what extent he will stoop low to get his revenge/what's gonna be the consequences/how he's gonna avoid radars?

nah! either change the name or get something worth calling revenge. where's guns, where's mafia, what's he gonna frams em with?, who's first in line to get his life ruined?