Bai_JieJie250
[Beginner Writer] I like making Novels while making readers mad and make a one-sided relationship I'm pretty young so my Writing is not too good Btw I'm not really Chinese just like the culture :3
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Bai_JieJie2504dCommentedTLX is s bit arrogant.. But I also do that too, so I can't say much.
Tang Li Xue began to examine the giant Queen of the Sea statue closer while commenting in a leisurely tone: "Not bad, the statue of this lady is quite beautiful. Unfortunately, she is still far from being as good-looking as me."- Bai_JieJie2504dCommented
Repetitive Description
But when Tang Li Xue saw an over one-hundred-meter-tall stone statue facing the entrance in the middle of the huge bright hall, she quickly took a few steps back in reflex. - Bai_JieJie2504dCommented
Does the Author have an obsession with the Word 50,100,etc(insert number) -meter tall when it comes to size? a Short 'Gigantic', 'Enormous', etc would be enough to Describe the height. I'm sorry if this seems like I'm hating but I just want to make my own opinion since the Author has a Repetitive habit
Ch 840 Chapter 840: Great Disaster! - Bai_JieJie2504dCommented
The Author has a bad habit on repeating sentences, I hope the Author learns to fix that. It makes the story feel very Repetitive by writing the same thing too much.
The palpitating horrible aura emitted from the strange creature's body became increasingly terrifying with each passing second as it absorbed the abundant star energy from [Star Gathering Bodhi Tree]'s Star Essence. - Bai_JieJie25010dCommented
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Each of them was also holding a thick and heavy bone trident in their grasp. - Bai_JieJie25019dCommentedCh 834 Chapter 834: Underwater Cave!
- Bai_JieJie25020dReplied to Bai_JieJie250Ch 832 Chapter 832: Onward to the Next Destination!
- Bai_JieJie25020dCommentedCh 832 Chapter 832: Onward to the Next Destination!
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I imagined the beautiful lady, with long black hair, and porcelain skin from afar but when you see her closer her skin is rotting and peeling off under her dress, and a corpse like smell is attached to her. The thin fingers she hid under her sleeves are actually claws that are stained in crimson dried red. When she opens her mouth it'll agape like some sort of viper with teeth attached everywhere inside her mouth, and sunken eyes.
The beautiful lady swiftly flashed forward toward Tang Li Xue and forcefully grabbed Tang Li Xue's neck! - Bai_JieJie2501mthReplied to DaoistW40miC
but it's unlikely haha, if it was, he would've been called Demonic sword master
If it was an ordinary Core Formation Stage cultivator used this [Heavenly Sword Techniques], the muscles and bones on their entire arm would be damaged, they would not be able to move their arm around, and it would take at least a few days for their arm to recover. - Bai_JieJie2501mthReplied to
maybe the Heavenly Sword Immortal was a sadist, and wanted to trick people into losing their life's by using it, I've seen a bit of the trope in novels where the Ancient Master, Sword God, etc makes a trap, trick in their manuals surpricing the MC bc it was for fun, sadist,etc tho it's rare n I don't remember them anymore
If it was an ordinary Core Formation Stage cultivator used this [Heavenly Sword Techniques], the muscles and bones on their entire arm would be damaged, they would not be able to move their arm around, and it would take at least a few days for their arm to recover. - Bai_JieJie2501mthReplied to Kitsunny_Bleith
I just what to hear another description of TLX honestly
"Yo~! It is finally my turn, huh... I am tired of waiting~!" The perfect copy smiled excitedly while stretching her slender body. - Bai_JieJie2501mthReplied to
oh, I'm not a native speaker too actually. I think I'm pretty okay in English but I hate using a repeated sentence too many times
"Yo~! It is finally my turn, huh... I am tired of waiting~!" The perfect copy smiled excitedly while stretching her slender body. - Bai_JieJie2501mthCommentedCh 817 Chapter 817: Double Dragons!
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she's a adult yet she keeps going to the ML even if Instructor mri lan kept saying not to, and warning her, her IQ feels like a teen
"What are you talking about?! They are our close companions! How could you complain like that?! Moreover, you are already an adult, so how could you ask an equal treatment with cubs like them?! Are you a big baby or something?! Do you want me to buy a pacifier for you?!" Tang Li Xue rebuked her perfect copy angrily. - Bai_JieJie2501mthCommented
I will literally explore if I hear 'TLX's/Perfect copy's slender body' one more time, there ar others Descriptions like 'TLX's perfect copy smiled excitedly, as she Streches her Flexible figure,' like anything but slender please???
"Yo~! It is finally my turn, huh... I am tired of waiting~!" The perfect copy smiled excitedly while stretching her slender body. - Bai_JieJie2501mthReplied to WolvenMoonlight
absolutely agree tbh I feel like author is probably self inserting herself, while also adding things she wish she could be onto TLX honestly I only read it for the unique plot with system n stuff but to me TLX's personality is 1/5 stars since I hate her Bratty, and Stupid personality plus she keeps going to the ML whose name I already forgot by now even after Mei Lan instructed her a million time not to interact with him, she literally has a mind of a teenage girl even if she died as an adult in her past life if I remember, ik she's aleyas sick and alone but she probably already learned something by now form the internet right??
Ch 812 Chapter 812: Azure Dragon Chapter's Martial Art!