FailedJedi

Well, it's a good story. It's a great Cyberpunk Story, but I don't think it's a good Celestial Forge story. Most Celestial Forge stories have more time given to making cool shit, and while some of that is there it's very little. I get that the Author is trying to have the protagonist seem realistic and relatable, but for CF fics that does not fit. Celestial Forge is for making cool shit, have him do that more. Apart from that, the Story is fantastic, the world building is very close to Cyberpunk, the Characters (including the protagonist) are amazingly written - minus the CF part, but lets see if that improves and chapters are long to make up for short updates. That also reminds me, updates are all over the place. There's no schedule for them, like there should be. Makes it harder to keep track of when the story is supposed to be updated. But the much longer chapters make up for it but even those don't have a set word count. Most authors write 1.5k every day, or every other day but this is sometimes 6k a week, to 15k the next. All over the place. Something more stable would be better imo, but that's just me. Apart from all that, 4.5/5 at least. Hidden Gem with some flaws.