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Allen_Danels

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2022-04-22 JoinedGlobal
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented
    Ch 42 World War Saitama: Part 2
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    One Laugh Man
    Anime & Comics · Sneekurp
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    For me it would be Reverse Flash who got annoyed by his brother so he went back in time and made sure he was not conceived. Now, he has ne brother and only he knows!

    Ch 69 Void Convention Of Evilness
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    DC: Rose Of Death
    Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Replied to Xezor1322M

    What I am saying is this, he should have gone for people with more authority first, not Midoriya's mother. I mean, sure, he will be close to him due to her but if you had strategized and thought higher, the MC would be receiving the power himself.

    Ch 5 [R18] Inko Midoriya and Deal
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    Psycopath Through Multiverse: AnimeVerse
    Anime & Comics · Xezor1322M
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    So, let me get this straight. He has the power to seduce any woman and the first he goes after is Midoriya's mother? I mean, he could have aimed higher like a politician, a member of the Hero Association or even the PM's wife or daughter that way he could meet All Might much more easier but instead he goes and rapes a weak willed woman? Now this is an example of low brain power to the author's side.

    Ch 5 [R18] Inko Midoriya and Deal
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    Psycopath Through Multiverse: AnimeVerse
    Anime & Comics · Xezor1322M
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    I can't believe I waited for a whole day just for a cliffhanger!

    Ch 58 Broken Bonds.
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    Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
    TV · Saintbarbido
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Posted

    simply the best ......... ..................................................................................................................

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    One Laugh Man
    Anime & Comics · Sneekurp
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Replied to Shyphoenix_1130

    Okay, I wasn't trying to be mean or anything; it's just that the way you were writing, jumping from one perspective to another while you could focus on eleven and twelve, show us more about them instead of feeding us crumbs, I mean there is even two chapters where the two were not in them. I'm just saying, I chose to read the book because twelve was in it. If you were just going to let him be a side character to a book related to him then I find it not worth my time.

    Ch 8 The Plan [Ep.2] [Edited]
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    012 [Stranger things X Male Oc]
    TV · Shyphoenix_1130
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    This is getting tedious and very much drawn out. If I wanted to know the plot of the series I would have rewatched it.

    Ch 8 The Plan [Ep.2] [Edited]
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    012 [Stranger things X Male Oc]
    TV · Shyphoenix_1130
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    So the whole theme of this book is cross-dressing? Imma pass on that

    Ch 3 3. Princess Xue Li
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    The Daily Life of Spirit Hall Prince
    Anime & Comics · harukazuchi
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    I wish I could say some colourful words because of the word count

    Ch 1 Astapor
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    Reincarnated As... Daenerys Targaryen?
    Book&Literature · Alex_Van_zyl
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    Trump would be proud

    Yup. I grabbed her by the pussy.
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    In This Corner Of The Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · GoldFinger
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    Have you ever been so excited for a chapter then the author does something stupid and you just wanna beat him up

    Ch 3 Two souls fused into one
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    Reborn in Bleach with OP wishes
    Anime & Comics · DarkGamerZ
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    Rhaegor: I chose genocide Everyone:

    Ch 3 Chapter 14
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    TV · VenerableDemon
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Replied to Gumbus

    Dude looks like he lifted all the weights in the gym

    The white spines while not the strongest, a position that belongs to the blind behemoths found in The Black Trench of the deep forest, are the second most dangerous by far. (Img for blind behemoth)
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    Mars aflame
    Anime & Comics · Gumbus
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    this chapter made me puke. I guess it is in the trash bin for me

    Ch 7 Xia Qingyue
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    Traversing The Omni-Realities
    Anime & Comics · OnlyTheTip
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    Please, reduce the 'met a beautiful girl by accident's cliche moments. Build up your story so that you won't be categorized in the same level as most harem fanfic authors. That's why people get tired and irritated of them, like I am starting to be.

    Ch 6 Floating Cloud City
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    Traversing The Omni-Realities
    Anime & Comics · OnlyTheTip
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    I hate these kinds of novels. The author let's the mc train for a short time then they take them out of there only to end up running into a situation that will make him grow even more stronger than he was training or fall for a devil fruit! Yeah, dropped

    Ch 1 Training begins [Edited]
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    One Piece: ...............
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    Wow, this is the most frustrating and boring into ever

    Ch 1 Chapter 001 – Prologue - A Phoenix
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    The Phoenix - A GOT Fan-Fiction
    TV · GodOfFreedom
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Commented

    Dude, your story is amazing and probably the only book in my library that makes me spend bundles just to see if there's an update. Keep writing this amazing story and don't let anyone tell you how to write it.

    Ch 11 From me to you
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    DC: God of Momentum
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  • Allen_Danels
    Allen_Danels1yr
    Replied to mystery889

    So, let's take renewal for instance. Jin Mori is the monkey king so he should have brought the thing to new heights. But, you forget that the old man who invented the other martial arts is just human. No hidden ancestry, no hidden bloodline, just human and he brought the martial arts to the point where he could be an S-rank hero, capable of defeating dragon rank monsters! I think the author just decided to pick the easiest and just be over with while ignoring the potential of the two.

    When looking at the 2 however it becomes clear what I should pick, Renewal Taekwondo has the most growth potential of all of these. With just this alone I could fight against gods just like Jin Taejin.
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    Multiversal Apocalypse: Everybody Can Now Enter Fictional Worlds
    Anime & Comics · BoundlessSarcasm
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