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What I am saying is this, he should have gone for people with more authority first, not Midoriya's mother. I mean, sure, he will be close to him due to her but if you had strategized and thought higher, the MC would be receiving the power himself.
So, let me get this straight. He has the power to seduce any woman and the first he goes after is Midoriya's mother? I mean, he could have aimed higher like a politician, a member of the Hero Association or even the PM's wife or daughter that way he could meet All Might much more easier but instead he goes and rapes a weak willed woman? Now this is an example of low brain power to the author's side.
Okay, I wasn't trying to be mean or anything; it's just that the way you were writing, jumping from one perspective to another while you could focus on eleven and twelve, show us more about them instead of feeding us crumbs, I mean there is even two chapters where the two were not in them. I'm just saying, I chose to read the book because twelve was in it. If you were just going to let him be a side character to a book related to him then I find it not worth my time.
Trump would be proud
Dude looks like he lifted all the weights in the gym
I hate these kinds of novels. The author let's the mc train for a short time then they take them out of there only to end up running into a situation that will make him grow even more stronger than he was training or fall for a devil fruit! Yeah, dropped
So, let's take renewal for instance. Jin Mori is the monkey king so he should have brought the thing to new heights. But, you forget that the old man who invented the other martial arts is just human. No hidden ancestry, no hidden bloodline, just human and he brought the martial arts to the point where he could be an S-rank hero, capable of defeating dragon rank monsters! I think the author just decided to pick the easiest and just be over with while ignoring the potential of the two.