M0ran

On Chapter 13 right now and really like the story! It's my first time reading books about Lycan and wolf shifters and now I'm tempted to try more! Such a great build-up to the first climax where they meet each other in person. I just want to hug our poor Mack and hope she got all the love she deserves in the end! Also love the mention of MMA in the story! As BJJ practitioner myself, a bit technique break down about what happened in the fight scene: so the position used to control Mack is called mount, basically Ramon just sits on Mack's belly, tho Mack didn't understand what mount is but with a simple bridge she gets on top, but she is still in Ramon's close guard, which means Ramon got his leg wrapped around Mack's waist, from there I would recommend Ramon does a de la hiva guard and followed by a berimbolo to take Mack's back for better control...anyways enough with BJJ talking and I'm excited to read more! PS: I think Mack should take on some BJJ to help her fight the evil shifters ;)

Amazing story and great writing! One of the unpredictable twists really made me laugh. Really enjoy the detailed description of the main character's emotions and thoughts, and makes it really easy to relate to the story. Great build-up for other characters too! Looking forward to the relationship development between these characters. Keep up the good work!!