WanderingFool
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WanderingFool1dPostedI read this story elsewhere, but felt I should leave a review anyway. The story started mildly slow, but once it picked up, it was a very good read for a while. Unfortunately, I'm not sure what happened, but all kinds of build up got tossed out or condensed into one of the most rushed conclusions I've ever had the displeasure of reading. I legitimately would have preferred a hiatus cut off in the middle of an arc over that sloppy ending. To summarize, the first 40 chapters were slow but interesting to read, 40ish-130ish were very good, 130ish to 150ish were decent albeit with a tonal shift, and the last couple dozen chapters slap you across the face like a deadbeat dad.
- WanderingFool11dCommented"Heh you know? Then it will shorten. Eiji Seiya, tell me honestly. What did you do to my little sister? Where is she?!"
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I usually find it hotter inside without a/c, tbh
I couldn't go out for a walk either, because it was so hot that it was impossible to be outside, unless you wanted to die of sunstroke. - WanderingFool15dReplied to LuluViBritania
So, yeh, I don't think you are understanding what I'm saying. As stated, the characters from the series are there alongside some oc's. There is nothing wrong with following the original plot, but after reading 100 times, it becomes boring. Fanfiction can do more than just copy.
A/N: Although the story will take place in DxD, a lot of it will be original content. I don't have much interest in following the main plot. Many of the main characters will be here, but for all intents and purposes, this is a fully Alternate Universe with very mild crossover elements. Happy reading, I guess. - WanderingFool15dReplied to
Fanfiction definition: "fiction written by a fan of, and featuring characters from, a particular TV series, movie, etc."
A/N: Although the story will take place in DxD, a lot of it will be original content. I don't have much interest in following the main plot. Many of the main characters will be here, but for all intents and purposes, this is a fully Alternate Universe with very mild crossover elements. Happy reading, I guess. - WanderingFool19dReplied to Lordmoonlight
- WanderingFool20dReplied to hhao
I'm getting Subnautica flashbacks now...
Eventually, he stopped in front of the massive jawbone that was halfway buried in the sand. Wide-eyed, he raised his head to look at the few teeth still attached to the skull. Just a single tooth dwarfed his body by several times. He felt like an amoeba standing before this titan of a skeleton. - WanderingFool20dReplied to JaywalkerCh 11 Chapter 11
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Mitsune
"I'm Konno Mitsune. Nice to meet you, kid." - WanderingFool20dCommented
Motoko
"Um. My name is Aoyama Motoko. Nice to meet you, cousin of Naru," The girl quickly introduced herself in order to change the subject. - WanderingFool20dCommented
Kaolla
"Nice to meet you, Ken-san! I'm Kaolla!" The girl happily introduced herself with a salute. - WanderingFool20dCommented
Haruka
"Likewise. I'm the caretaker here, Urashima Haruka. Call me whatever you like." - WanderingFool20dReplied to LuluViBritania
Rescinding my previous comment since it didn't convey my meaning the way I wanted it to. Essentially, I was trying to say that you are limiting what a fanfiction can be with that statement. IMO, the best fanfictions are the ones that utilize baseline loresets and rulesets to explore their creativity, like a dnd session within an established world. Hope that makes more sense than my previous dull comment.
A/N: Although the story will take place in DxD, a lot of it will be original content. I don't have much interest in following the main plot. Many of the main characters will be here, but for all intents and purposes, this is a fully Alternate Universe with very mild crossover elements. Happy reading, I guess. - WanderingFool22dReplied to sari_saarinen
It isn't a cheat. In case you skipped my notes, this is not typical wish fulfillment ff. I have yet to show all his power can do, but based on your comment, I don't believe this will be the type of story you are looking for at this moment in time.
Ch 5 Chapter 5 - WanderingFool23dReplied to
Sorry, but I beg to differ. It just isn't the type of fanfiction you like at the moment.
A/N: Although the story will take place in DxD, a lot of it will be original content. I don't have much interest in following the main plot. Many of the main characters will be here, but for all intents and purposes, this is a fully Alternate Universe with very mild crossover elements. Happy reading, I guess. - WanderingFool24dReplied to Miami_XM
It'll pretty much just be weekend updates unless I get company vacation or something.
A/N: Just to warn you guys, I'm a slow writer, so I won't be able to keep up with updating constantly like some of the more talented people here. Also, please don't expect sunshine and rainbows the whole way. It'll have both good and bad, happy and sad, albeit mostly positive, I suppose. This is wish fulfillment, but not to the fullest extent. Just wanted to get those two things out of the way to avoid certain expectations I might not be able to live up to. - WanderingFool24dReplied to randomusername1
He figured they would be able to tell the difference, but I'm not sure I actually specified that or not.
Through his eyelids, he vaguely made out two coagulations of lines and symbols approaching from his left. He turned his head toward them. In response, they immediately halted. Circular patterns more visible than anything else he could perceive appeared in front of the two blobs. - WanderingFool24dReplied to randomusername1
She is trying to ignore them
"I'm okay, but are you okay? I'll call an ambulance for you."