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  • Lillia_Seris33
    Lillia_Seris332mth
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    This review is going to be a short one as there isn’t much to work with. I‘ll be leaving a 5 star for support and I see the vision. Just don’t mess it up author.

    Rift Dweller: The Forgotten Kingdom
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  • Lillia_Seris33
    Lillia_Seris332mth
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    I like how it taps into knowledge about the current world slowly but needs more, add more info

    Ch 2 Unfair and Unjust
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  • Lillia_Seris33
    Lillia_Seris332mth
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    The knowledge on what’s happening is kind of vague but it adds to the start.

    Ch 1 Survival
    Rift Dweller: The Forgotten Kingdom
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  • Lillia_Seris33
    Lillia_Seris332yr
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    This chapter is a sign that the author is starting to get better and progress. Keep up the good work. Very nice cliffhanger!

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  • Lillia_Seris33
    Lillia_Seris332yr
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    I came here from the authors previous works, this is a prequel so I'm expecting a lot to be explained. I will leave this review here for further support!

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  • Lillia_Seris33
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    If it wasn't for the improvement in the latest chapters this would have been a 3.5 at most. The author likes keeping thing in the sark sure, but you have to let the readers in on what is happening as well, other than that the story gets much better past chapter 8. Keep improving.

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