Zeustiak

First time meeting them and he spends ten minutes standing there with his eyes closed? What a horribly written, poorly thought out scene.

There is no way they detected light if it took them an entire hour to reach its source. This author should try spelunking sometime.

Some of the worst writing I have seen on this app.

This is some of the dumbest shot I have ever read.

What the hell, it would just turn the dirt and rock into lava not sink into it.

So far this story is ridiculous in a pretty stupid way. Hopefully it gets better.

How stupid.

This was one of the dumbest chapters I have ever read.

Really, that is the downside that a second edge brings? What nonsense.

Trillions died to the ‘emotional impact’? What kind of dumb shit is this?