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patbateman123x1yrReplied to Cypher_Risersorry for the grammar mistakes i am Turkish so English isnt exactly my forte . But thanks for the feedback glad you are enjoying it . I'll to revisit chapters after i come back to fix my mistakes but for now please bear with it
Ch 4 Ep 4 : A Ghost from the Past- patbateman123x1yrReplied to wolfdstroyerCh 14 Update
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shin at it with the cuirass of a falling star metahhhhh
The fireball was coming down like a meteor .Shin took off from the courtyard like a missile.He soared through the air surging forward in an electrified motion like a bullet. Golden energy engulfed his body .He vecame a meteor of his own , wreathed in lightning, bringing down havoc from the ground instead and meeting the fireball head on. The destructive force of their clash shook the entire royal palace . The king and queen were worried about the state of their daughter and the neighboring country's princess .If anything bad happened , it could spell doom for their country but they put their faith in the young man. They both prayed to their Goddess. - patbateman123x1yrReplied to
thats what i was going for hahaha
"Hey , you . You are finally awake ." - patbateman123x1yrCommentedCh 32 June 19th, 2032 | Dance of the Ice Phoenix
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u mean a tool?
"Welcome back," she said with a gentle smile making my heart skip a beat. Woah, that is some destructive power right there. Also, isn't she supposed to say it when I go out of here and then come back? - patbateman123x1yrReplied to patbateman123x
*his
'Emotions….' Leon chuckled maniacally in his thoughts, 'These things are awful! How do people live with these!? I only experience them at partial capacity with two women and already hate my life!' - patbateman123x1yrCommented
kaite? tf .Wasnt she kate?
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sigma grindset hahahaha
"My wife!" - patbateman123x1yrCommented
i really like the mc so far
"I never had a reason to spend the money, and I just wanted to be able to do what I wanted. If I played poor, no one really bothered me, and the only ones that knew were the ones I wanted to. I lived a great boring life before you came around!" I complained as I headed over to the fox burrow. - patbateman123x1yrReplied to Lord_SadnessCh 13 Novel Update
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sheesh everything is so cartoonishly silly lol
"Damn, this brat is good with words, HAHAHA. Don't worry, brat, they will not torture you while I'm here." - patbateman123x1yrReplied to Sinful_Cyanide
and the idiot is falling into her trap
'Thanks, that's cute, I will exclusively let you play with my body, if you agreed to help me' Isabella giggled, hoping to make Alex charmed with her astonishing body... - patbateman123x1yrCommented
the description said he is not a beta but you should clarify that he is a simp atleast .I m cringing so hard
He looked at her cute face and smiled," awww my wifey is such a cutie, it wanna make me kiss her whole day long till her lips are sore, you are already proficient in way of coaxing me, it just wanna make me do it again so much". - patbateman123x1yrCommented
good call author .Sorry i was harsh on you before but ive gotten into the novel's groove now
2) No, there isn't incest. It's just a clickbait to get the incest-degens-... connoisseurs to read my novel. There will be R-18 content though. Whether it's a deal-breaker or not, that's up to you. As for the harem aspect, I'm only thinking of developing the four main female leads. One reason why I wrote this novel was because I didn't like how some harem novels had just too many female characters, so much so that I would lose track of who was who. So for now, I will focus on the four girls on the cover, or at the very least until the story develops to the point where adding a new character wouldn't feel too overwhelming. - patbateman123x1yrCommented
king grindset
I wanted to ravage this woman and make her mine. - patbateman123x1yrReplied to Empyrium
i think she did suck his dick
"It's really big…" - patbateman123x1yrCommented
okay so he wasnt dense... thats on me . Sorry
Those were my true thoughts. While Irina might consider me as her brother, in my mind, Irina was a 'younger beautiful girl that I loved.' It didn't matter if she was my sister or not. Heck, I would prefer it if she were my lover. Even I had primal urges to reproduce, you know. Night after night, I had to resist my sexual desires to devour this perfect specimen before me. - patbateman123x1yrCommented
but u act like a 12 year old
"Mom… I'm twenty-five…"