Abdul_Salam_FASAMI

More chapter to give detail (one or two chapters)

Yes you true but i preferred the first version because it was more enjoyable to read. Also I felt more emotion coming from the chapters. Maybe it's just me, but I feel like the chapters written using Chat Gdp are too dry and lack emotion, it's too robotic. Maybe it's because of the word choices

Thank you for the chapter.I prefer your old writting style.Now it seems like you used Chat Gdp

he must win now

Unique Novel ,I like it ,please continue to write 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

why the death of danzo take too much chapter like that?I thought that this will finished in 2 or 3 chapter maximum.

Great job of the authors .It’s very good history ,different from other fanfiction.Original history and different system .I want to read more .

Very good fiction about hip hop .There are everything about hip hop culture in the writing process of author ,Battle ,Gangster Rap ,clash every thing.Continue man

Très bon roman ,j'adore le caractère des personnages sont tres bien maîtrise. Je m'attendais à un système de medcine mais je suis erreur que sa soit pas le cas .n'abandonne surtout pas