I realy love how divers you have made the world.

Understandable and good luck with the course.

I personakt dont realy like his character that much and it felas like he has to many cheats. otherwise the story is interesting and has well written dialog and characters.

Yay you came back now I will wait expectantly for more chapters

As a whole this is a realy good fan fiction that deserves more recognition. . ………………………………………………………. …………………………………………..::::………………………..

I would say don't gender-bend them all.

Hope you can continu this ff i realy like it

Hope no harem but if you decide on one could you make it a small one

I like that he wont stay as a small villan or rival and has his character development

Love what you have done with the characters it’s realy interesting

I realy like this hope you will stick with it to the end

Hope it can be fixed and good luck with all that

TFTC i realy like the way this is going

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that's ruff hope you can get back your motivation and good luck with your tests

Hope you can make this like you Wanted to.

TFTC

TFTC and how many months/years Will he be on the island?

TFTC and i like the way you have writen this