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Well author-san, if you go for new powers in mc maybe you can be inspired by the Hindu trinity, since he has the power of shiva, why not have the power of Vishnu and Brahma

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now the chapt is better, keep improving author-san

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Take my stones author-san this is more addictive than cocaine. The way he is, he's going to become Gitae Kim.

Look author, I really liked the intention of the fanfic, however it is very poorly used, the story is very advanced, there is a lack of detail on MC's life, and the iterations are very superficial, and when I'm reading this it doesn't seem like MC's story , but rather, of a secondary character. I believe it's better to redo this fanfic (like redoing the mc's iterations with the characters, not advancing so quickly in the story, it gives the mc more personality, and maybe adding points of view and other characters, as most readers are part of this concept loves it), because I don't believe it won't go forward the way it is being written.

The goal is for him to become Baba Yaga himself

you have excellent taste in music author-San.

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More sus

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Oh my god

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