I think you are rushing it a little too much, but otherwise, I like it, so keep up the good work

you really need to stick one name for technique and cultivation lvls cause you are changing them every chapter it seems

hey you finally update the story again can't wait for more

you need to fix chapter 29 before I will read any more cause 28 and 29 are the same chapter so it's hard to picture

thanks for the chapter

just a thought but you could have made a new story if you wanted to do another insert I'll still try to read this hope it doesn't kill the story for me

thanks for the chapter

I really enjoy reading this I have noticed some of the words are stuck together as in you forgot the space only flaw I have seen so far otherwise great fanfic and I'll keep reading if you keep writing

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thanks for the chapter

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thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter I am enjoying the fanfic so far keep up the awesome work

thanks for the chapter I think there should be a Gwen version of venom in this story just to throw a wrench into the mix so to say also why he not maxed out red hood yet

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter I am enjoying this so far

5min times 1000 equals 5000 min divide by 60 equals 83.33 hours

I can't spell worth a shit

he used the goblin concil as a threat to get what he wants

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