Cruz_Scifers1988

I honestly enjoyed reading this and will keep reading till the end and hope you keep writing and don't let the people who don't like it get you down most of the people who say bad things about these fanfics have never tried to create one of there own ps I know my grammar sucks and I didn't use any punctuation

I enjoy this type of fanfic are you using a specific list for the rolls or I think someone made a website with a random ability generator from fiction

I think she left to think about the offer

this is the first mention of a car where has it been for the rest of the story did he just get it or did he just not want to drive cause as soon as I had a car I drove to school and anywhere that was more than a 10 min walk

he already knew about the other personality in the mirror and now he doesn't what's going on with this story

he walked to school the first time and now he takes the bus it's not adding up the bus doesn't pick up students who live in a easy walking distance

I don't know, but I think you have the years and ages wrong. I never really kept track

he starts with 1% so you add 24% and you get 25%.

it's good I think I will enjoy reading this and will be waiting on updates just like your marvel fanfic

like batman cartoon not movie because those are different or teenage mutant ninja turtles maybe become friends with them or give them transformation techniques or items so they don't have to hide all the time