The beginning of the story seems very well developed to me, it seemed a bit short, but it was concise and also very well written, I have loved each chapter and I imagine this as if it were a Netflix drama, more specifically as Kingdom and I love it, for how intriguing that is. The end of chapter 5 was very intriguing, I loved this chapter particularly for the dialogue, I found it very dynamic and entertaining, keep it up. The characters seem worthy of a netflix drama and I find them very entertaining, the cover seems to me to be very detailed and very cool. I think I will never get tired of saying that I love the way it is going and it distills so much xianxia that it is impossible for me to read it and reread it.