Dauntless_Flores

I quite like this story. It has a plot and not some mindless op character. I hope there won't be any meaningless harem and romance though, it would just make the story deviate from the developing from weak to strong. I think this have the potential to be one of those fics that focuses only on getting stronger and maybe even develop to writing an exciting fight with Sukuna. Personally, I feel that adding harem and romance would just ruin the story since it would feel awkward training to be strong then there would suddenly be a chick popping up that would either be used for some chap fillers about developing a happy family or whatnot. We'll, it could be just me, but I think it's better not having those genre at all and just focus on getting stronger. The MC can have those chicks when he can defeat Sukuna, but for the story development, it's better if there's no chick for the time being. Just focus on exciting fights, it's better that way.

100 pitches a day as a 15 yrs old is insaneeee

Should've put a romance tag. The writing is average, you can find some mistakes here and there, but the plot is quite okay. I'm just not into an unbalanced plot of sports and romance without the tag. Caught me off guard and the interactions are forced and awkward.

What kind of infiltration is this😭 He didn't even try to disguise 😭

At this point, I can't really trust the MC because none of his plans just works out the way he wants it to be. It's fine for one time but it gets repeated like a cycle.

So many things are just happening in one scene. They're already in a pinch, I'm guessing that you want to follow the og plotline and make Minato and Kushina die and then the MC will grow stronger after that. It's my gut feeling, but I hope, I'm wrong.

This is really getting more and more entertaining.

I thought you wrote this fix to change some plots, but you just don't wanna risk it in the end anyways.

Dang, this is harem?! 🙂

Please don't have any pairings(⁠╥⁠﹏⁠╥⁠) It's kind of fine if the pairings don't end up ruining the original pairings in the anime, but I think having no pairings is still the best, isn't it?