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The_Miner6mthPosted- The_Miner1yrCommentedCh 63 Resonance [2]
- The_Miner1yrCommentedWasn't my room on the second floor?
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To ash and dust I wipe my brow and I sweat my rust
Waking Up (1) - The_Miner1yrCommented
Mhm
"If I was naruto I would become a Villian and destroyed the village" (Authors Note) Kind of cringe - The_Miner1yrReplied to OromisEldaGlaedr
Bro she like 12
'Oh? Is this Katara?' thought Genji as he looked at Katara with a bit of surprise. 'She's pretty cute, maybe I should greet her.' - The_Miner1yrCommented
At least he acknowledges it
Then it hit me, I was in danger, in very very grave danger. That mutt, he was strong, I was a prideful person but I wasn't a complete retard. - The_Miner1yrCommented
MUHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA
Mikumo has been reborn...as a female! - The_Miner1yrPosted
Writing Quality: The grammar is good for the most part excluding the complete lack of punctuation. {3.5/5} Stability of Updates: It's hard to give an accurate rating for this as there have only been 4 chapters.[{3/5} for now] Story Development: So far the story is relatively straightforward and the plot doesn't seem to be developing too quickly. {4/5} Character Design: We have only been introduced to the main character as of now, but their character design is decent from what I've seen. {4/5} Wold Background: It's star wars. {5/5} Overall review: The story has an intriguing premise, is lacking a little in writing quality, is not a harem, and has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work author.
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If you're asking that, then maybe it shouldn't be higher than the rest of your stats.
This book has been deleted. - The_Miner1yrCommented
Kill him.
His name's Darius and he is known for liking boys, and the crime he was in was sexual assault. - The_Miner1yrCommented
Ayo?
"What ?! A kid ?! I told you I don't like kids ! It was One time ! One time !" - The_Miner1yrCommented
Kakashi?
On top of that, a strange white-haired teen used to teach her ninjutsu and about the world outside the world sometimes. - The_Miner1yrReplied to BASTILLE
Why???
"At least, you are a bit smart. We need a boat and a cook at the very least." Nami sighed and spoke. - The_Miner1yrCommented
He has convinced the air-filled rubber man.
Hearing his words, Luffy smashed his fist on his palm and said "I understand. You can become a dreamless pirate because pirates can be anything." - The_Miner1yrCommented"The nerve..."
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Ah, I see. So it's true that we must wait hundreds of years for its return.
"It can't be!! New volume of the Hunter x Hunter manga!! Togashi Damn you stop playing dragon quest!!" said Oboro quite excited to then go annoying after months without a chapter. - The_Miner1yrCommented'I didn't think that would work' Doryoku thought with blank eyes and in disbelief.
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Luffy?!??
"I can turn everything I touch into rubber!" said a pink haired girl touching a notebook and throwing it to the ground causing it to bounce several times. - The_Miner1yrReplied to Monsterb620It's kinda fucked that musicians eat sandwiches by placing them inside trombones and honking them into each other's mouths