The_Miner

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Just caught up; loving the story so far, keep it up *Thumbs Up*.

To ash and dust I wipe my brow and I sweat my rust

Mhm

Bro she like 12

At least he acknowledges it

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Writing Quality: The grammar is good for the most part excluding the complete lack of punctuation. {3.5/5} Stability of Updates: It's hard to give an accurate rating for this as there have only been 4 chapters.[{3/5} for now] Story Development: So far the story is relatively straightforward and the plot doesn't seem to be developing too quickly. {4/5} Character Design: We have only been introduced to the main character as of now, but their character design is decent from what I've seen. {4/5} Wold Background: It's star wars. {5/5} Overall review: The story has an intriguing premise, is lacking a little in writing quality, is not a harem, and has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work author.

If you're asking that, then maybe it shouldn't be higher than the rest of your stats.