MIa_Laura

Good one

Nice storybuild up. I am guessing that there will be a gruesome plot twist that would result in a divergence of plot into two sections. i am awaiting it.

This is good novela nd teh plot design sdesgined kkeeping twopo protagonist in mind.

The progression is good. Increasing the power too suddenly would give a sense of fabrication. I just hope that there could be more stories with female counterparts with the same power levels as this.