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Sword_Celestial

Sword_Celestial

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2022-04-14 JoinedPhilippines
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    Sword_Celestiala year ago
    Replied to YAMRAAJ_021

    I don't have much to complain about in your writings but you should fix some chapters because some of them have some 'errors' in them or if you have no time to fix those it is best if you put a warning in the titles so that future readers don't have to waste coins or fast pass and also you should also give some details about cultivation when the mc is breaking through a major realm like what unique abilities they will get in this major realm, how much life span they will have in this realm, how many minor realms there are and so on.

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    Sword_Celestiala year ago
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    It's okay for him to be a villain and use others for their opportunities like Su Ling, just because she is a heroine doesn't mean that Wang Chen should care about them immediately, I mean they barely knew each other although i think Li Mei can be considered a friend, but it is just my opinion because not much has been developed between them, as for romance author, I think you should not let the heroines fall in love immediately to the mc without proper development from both parties like the mc is not a son of luck that can charm anyone with just a smile, because if they fall in love immediately without giving them a development they will be like an easy item to obtain and that will just make them not stand out from the rest of the female characters

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    Sword_Celestiala year ago
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter!

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    Sword_Celestiala year ago
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter! btw will Satan recognize Michaela because technically in the bible Michaela is portrayed as a male or is in this universe Michael is portrayed as a female?