Ann_Noan

*at the sight of Alexander

The plot holds potential and the characters are interesting in their own way. I kinda get lost with the flow of the story and by the abrupt changes of POV in the middle but it nonetheless, I recommend it to people into mafia stories like me! There were some minor wording errors but it could easily be edited😊 Keep writing author!

Full of action already from the first chapter! There were some minor errors with punctuation and wordings but the built up to the story is nice. I also like how mysterious the FL is, I want to get to know her! keep writing author!

Feels like I'm in an anime! I like the storybuilding since it didn't cram a full exposition down my throat at the first chapter. It didn't feel rush and I instantly got sucked into the world😍 I've always wanted to write a fantasy one but I find it too intimidating but u made it seem easy! There are some phrasesand word I found repetitive but it's not that bothersome. Recommend this and I'd definitely read on to see what happens next!

Good start already! although it was quite slow for me or I was just too excited to know what the deal with their grandma is😂 so the buildup was great actually! few punctuation and spelling errors here and there but nonetheless the story has a smooth flow so it's not that bothersome. keep writing!

I admit I am still struggling with my book cover. I guess I should get more on finalizing it now since it will be the first thing the readers will judge. Thank you for your nice words!

I have yet to judge this book fully since it only have 1 chapter so far but I liked how it ends because it definitely made me curious :) The FL is interesting to me since I had a friend who was like her and her hs life was actual hell but still, she remains one of the happiest people I know. Can't wait to read what happens next!

As promised, the author delivers a very steamy story with an interesting plot! I just finished chapter 5 (which is so hot ;) ) and I'm definitely going to read more of it! The heroine is not one dimensional and relatable. I haven't known a lot more about the male lead but he sure is yummy! There are some minor wording and punctuation errors but the plot makes up for it!

It's very exciting from the start! This is what I've been looking for. I've just finished chapter 1 and it's full of action already. Can't wait to get to know the characters😊