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No problem, I want this novel to get more popular, so you won’t drop it hehe. Also why don’t you make a discord?

I will be honest I had no expectation of this novel given well the name sounds like typical Chinese slop mixed with middle school desperation. The image also looks extremely ai, however the writing is one of the best in this site. Through the writing it feels like the author actively imagines the scenario, and puts in a ton of effort polishing his work to make things more realistic. The comedy is top of the top tier, I giggled atleast 10 times, and overall the novel is just great. Nothing is bland and there is indeed a sense of progression and arguably more important, the system’s role in the story is very much conservative and the main character actually has to earn what they do mostly(w some cheats ofc). 10/10 novel.

The novel is pretty decent in that it has a pretty unique world background, it has a great relationship development between the mc and fmc, and that nunu[the author] has finally overcome his autism[lol] to be relatively consistent. While these factors do make the novel interesting ish, its ultimately meh at best. The reason is we are no in ch300, and there barely has been any progress in terms of actual world development, we get glimpses sure but nothing substansial, and all the time is just spent on more "useless" details like move attack, some random passive trait etc. Now this in itself is not a problem when the amount of moves to learn is relatively low, but this novel has too many moves, too many move types that its absolutely obnoxious, no i don’t care about this random move and this random detail, its just not interesting to me and forces me to have a superhuman memory, or just be a passive reader. Secondly, aside from the details, the characters themselves are too one dimensional, they follow kind of a set archetype and don’t change, and we never get to explore the reasons why other than surface reasoning like oh they are rich, oh they are poor or whatever. And really the characters themselves are quite off? Like there was a scene were the mc goes to upper zone as a poor clothed person, and then everyone started making fun of him there and the police caught him there, until fmc came in with their bugatti to save the day, like is this not a classic faceslapping trope? And also just think about it, who in reality ever openly mocks and makes fun of people?, no one, they may snicker, but not society ever lasts without some level of decency, this just doesn’t exist here. For all the details, nothing has been explored about other characters. Third, its slow pased to be slow pased, just because the story is moving slow doesn’t mean its good or actually detailed or anything, as said before if not used to improve the characters or plot, and just spent on freaking levels and other details it is a waste of time. Fourth, there is absolutely no suspense to the novel, nor is there any stakes other than very weak challenges that are very much achievable, this maybe a problem for any novel making their mc special, but the more powerful the mc, the harder the challenges should be. All the challenges the mc faces is challenging if mc was not special, the problem is he got the strongest potential and power, so thats out the window. So it really forces the novel to go down the slice of life route, and again this novel does it well with mc and fmc, but because i assume the author wants the story to be more action focused, again it makes the novel neither do slice of life properly nor action/war/ strategy whatever. The mc is not stupid but i wouldn’t call him intelligent because all the stuff he does is mostly “basic”? Like i feel like the author has a fundamental misjudgement on what "smart intelligence “ is, its not having more knowledge or even having the right knowledge[think about today with google/chatgpt everyone has it, it doesn’t mean that everyone is smart], intelligence is more so about knowing what knowledge is useful and knowing what is bullcrap, and again it can only be displayed in an environment with non-perfect information, which takes a lot of set up and this novel lacks. Last character criticism is that all good mc’s typically have some sort of philosophical and a style of doing things that kind of make them distinct, often this is done extremely poorly smh, but this novel has 0 of this, what it has is very basic? Its not that interesting. Final criticism is towards the world itself, this world is highly advanced with the civilization spanning across multiple planets, yet there is abject poverty and people are subjected basically to slavery? I am sorry what? Again a fundamental misunderstanding of the world itself, “who benefits from the people being poor and incapable of doing anything?” in a world where I assume there is a significant amount of automation, if not should be explained why not, one could say oh the rich wanna extract more from them, but “what is there to extract from the poor when they have nothing to give?”, the only thing these people have to give is their labor which itself should not be valuable becoz well automation, especially when they are doing basic basic jobs, its like saying we exploit the foxes in our world, we don’t; we just never care about them, and not even bother with them, which is clearly not the case because somehow this society needs poor people because of air pollution?, also is there no countries, no major factions like why even stay in corporation form? And not become kings or something. I think i have gotten my point across, there are just too many fundamental plotholes in the core of the novel itself, its not small minor plot holes[imagine something, i am too lazy to find something in this story] where we as the readers are going to ignore, nor is it something like why is elysium coming to earth? Like we get it, its a secret that mc will find later, but this is on a character level, and i don’t think based on the writing the author even considered these a problem, again its a fantasy world anything can happen, yes but all fantasy are ultimately tied to something of our life just so that we can imagine and relate. Now all in all, just like every other Nunu’s work the first 100 chapters are incredible, very interesting and really the details itself makes it much more enjoyable, really nothing bad to say here, but then it just goes all downhill, and this is speculation but as a long term nunu fan, i think for all the stories he writes eventually he runs out of stuff to write/interest himself with, i think the reason is becoz he has great ideas and good execution on said ideas for 100ish chaps, but because he hasn’t put thought into the world/core structure of the story, what is the theme, and the why, he struggles to deliver consistent long-chapter count quality content. This novel is the epitome of clickbait, where you got nothing to do? Well read this, turn off your brain completely and just consume, not necessarily a problem, but this kind of passive turn off your brain content is hard for a proper novel because you have to constantly deliver unique enough scenarios, where the reader can continue turning off their brain. Anyway, this is in no light a direct attack on anyone, this is just my honest opinion that may not be the case for everyone else.

I don't know what everyone else is doing, and why this novel is so lowly rated, it is one of the best fanfics out there with a completely unique concept and the execution of the chapters and very good too.

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Yo nice chapter, I was finally able to support this book, it’s a very good story keep up the good work.

“Just another leader who’d chosen to sacrifice the few for the theoretical benefit of many” dude this is bars, I am stealing this

Hey nunu, I love your work, this story has become part of my daily life and I really love the world building and general lore of this story. I would say that the story is kinda too slow paced and so far there really isn’t any broader theme:/goal the character is working towards, meaning for now this is a great slice of life story, not really a great actionstory, as it really lacks kinda the mystery and suspense needed for this genre. It is I suppose evolving into kingdom building genre, but not yet. All in all great slice of life work. Finally can you please make a patreon and or discord? I am someone who pirates the free chapters of this novel not becoz I don’t wanna pay but webnovels pricing model is frankly too anti consumer and it’s just not worth it to be honest, so if you can make the patreon I would be able to directly support you. Other than that, thanks for reading this review and have a nice day.

uh what are those?

naw man, u deserve it, like i mean the only other novel that made me feel bad about not spending was shadow slave, and well i was a kid so oh well, but yeah your novel is extremely extremely realistic, action packed and its very obvious through your writing you are pretty intelligent and are well-versed at politics, human psychology, organization structure, business to a certain extent[this one is a bit iffy i don't know yet], but yeah if i don't support you i am gonna have to live with the 100th harem thrash, no more i say XD.