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FBI_OpenUp2mthCommentedZ Brolly's irrationality is the thing that won him a huge fan base.
It's still so bizarre to see the Legendary Super Saiyan being so gentle with a glass of juice. Especially since I grew up with the genocidal psychopathic version known as Z Broly. If it had been that Broly, I wouldn't even consider saving him.- FBI_OpenUp4mthCommented
hahaha, man, it's the first time I laughed while reading a novel.
"Spirit nourishing spill. Use once, beg twice." - FBI_OpenUp6mthCommented
Hey author, good work out there but I have a small complaint about Yumiko's sudden change of behaviour towards others. I don't care about the original series but in here Yumiko was not that harsh and rude towards others before Hachiman had joined Service club. So I find this a little concerning, you know, you don't have to force change their personalities to match the original story.
Ch 198 [198] Hachiman Gears Up to Show Off - FBI_OpenUp9mthReplied to FBI_OpenUp
I dont't care if the background is similar to Ero Meter, but please do keep the personalities of characters and story fresh.
I thought about the concept about 4-years back, but never really got to write it. You might find similarities here and there, but you can always enjoy it. (For those who always see the negative and might use it in bad reviews) - FBI_OpenUp9mthReplied to The_Lonely_Guy
is it a coincidence that story is too similar to Ero Meter?
I thought about the concept about 4-years back, but never really got to write it. You might find similarities here and there, but you can always enjoy it. (For those who always see the negative and might use it in bad reviews) - FBI_OpenUp9mthCommented
F**k, why be a goody two shoes now. He was fine earlier with their slaughter.
"And then what? Sit here like a coward?" - FBI_OpenUp9mthReplied to FBI_OpenUpCh 148 Buu's friend
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*indecent.For readers
"Y— You...!" She was shy, seeing him acting innocent. - FBI_OpenUp10mthCommentedCh 50 Galatic Torunament[6]
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Just work on grammar, please. Otherwise, the novel is quite good..
But, please bash me more, the author, that is all I wish. - FBI_OpenUp10mthCommented
Please, author! I'm begging you if not good grammar then at least use correct pronouns.
He licks his lips maniacally, the one I was talking about is the famous Heaven's Bar Boss, a woman! - FBI_OpenUp10mthReplied to Barfk
Yeah, just leave your logic out for these novels.
"Tsk, tsk, your dog's eyes have a problem, you need to go see a doctor, do you know this place? This is where expensive and rare cars are, stop your fantasies, look at your poor appearance." The guard laughed loudly mocking him. - FBI_OpenUp10mthCommented
kissable? are other lips not kissable...?
Two thick eyebrows that were like a sword, His pupils were jet-black, red tempting kissable lips, and his nose is high, the height didn't change much, but the skin has become glossy jade-like. - FBI_OpenUp10mthCommented
*prompted
The system promoted, as a hologram appeared in his vision. - FBI_OpenUp10mthCommented
Man, that's 3rd wicket.
With one ball remaining and four runs required for victory, the tension reached its zenith. Nitish, drawing from his reservoir of courage, delivered an absolute toe-crushing yorker. The ball thudded into the base of the stumps, leaving the batsman no chance to respond. The stadium erupted in a thunderous roar as Nitish claimed his second wicket, sealing a thrilling victory for RCB. - FBI_OpenUp10mthCommented
Yo Author, I guess, there is some misunderstanding here. Firstly, Virat decided not to choose MC, then gives the final over to MC. I mean what is happening here.
With the match hanging in the balance, Virat Kohli, the RCB captain, turned to the young prodigy, Nitish, to deliver the decisive final over. The stadium buzzed with anticipation as Nitish prepared to showcase his skills on the grand stage. - FBI_OpenUp10mthReplied to FBI_OpenUp
*3 overs
The stadium reverberated with awe and admiration as Nitish became the first player in IPL history to bowl two consecutive maiden overs in his debut spell. His figures of 2 overs, 2 maidens, and 1 run with 2 wickets were a testament to his prodigious talent and immense potential. Commentators marveled at his ability to extract swing, his impeccable control over line and length, and his calmness under pressure.