Lunis_Von_Archean
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Lunis_Von_Archean1yrCommentedWell it is true he can make it a heavenly book
"If I were him, I would be too embarrassed to appear here. With his talent, even the yellow-grade books in the library are like heavenly books in his eyes."- Lunis_Von_Archean1yrReplied to MaxAkki
There is almost no beautiful women in marvel how could I select women who are as beautiful as her.
"For my second wish is a soul mate that i will be tasked to discover and potentially fall in love cause sometimes you have to be careful what you wish for maybe I won't like her or maybe I like her you don't know" Luke said. - Lunis_Von_Archean1yrReplied to AzagalPlay
Why would he/she interfere with a human being if she/he is already that powerful even if she/he can control him that would not be possible because they will have to deal with the universe first before they can control him because they are restricted to only where they came from they are only allowed to reincarnate beings
"I do now" Luke said. - Lunis_Von_Archean1yrReplied to MaxAkki
Why?
"For my second wish is a soul mate that i will be tasked to discover and potentially fall in love cause sometimes you have to be careful what you wish for maybe I won't like her or maybe I like her you don't know" Luke said. - Lunis_Von_Archean1yrReplied to Maverik89Ch 4 School
- Lunis_Von_Archean2yrReplied to CryingJoker
Ned is asking the question that is there any club he wanted to join since Luke already joined the Martial Arts Club why would he say that when he already joined the club and the question is what club is he joining
"Maybe the video games club" Luke said. - Lunis_Von_Archean2yrReplied to Jay_the_Otaku
Yes
'I have to pick Minato's appearance but i gotta add a little twist in the mix how about Minato's and Naruto's appearance combined' Jack thought. - Lunis_Von_Archean2yrReplied to Phil_Morris
It's Fan fic my guy
This chapter has been deleted. - Lunis_Von_Archean2yrReplied to Phil_Morris
He didn't know what world he was going to
This chapter has been deleted. - Lunis_Von_Archean2yrCommentedWe start this chapter with Haruto leaving his shack while carrying his sword while wearing a cloak he bought that is similar to Minato's cloak. ( Also Here's how the Katana looks by the way).
- Lunis_Von_Archean2yrReplied to DIVINE_DAO_OF_BONK
Forgot wait
We start this chapter with Haruto leaving his shack while carrying his sword while wearing a cloak he bought that is similar to Minato's cloak. ( Also Here's how the Katana looks by the way). - Lunis_Von_Archean2yrReplied to I_am_watching
If he can defeat kaguya what can she do
Cha: How much chakra is left from your chakra reserves. - Lunis_Von_Archean2yrReplied to GodofTheSpearCh 2 Getting started
- Lunis_Von_Archean2yrReplied to Fi3lCh 2 Getting started
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Well throughout his 7 year tenure he was constantly investing on his company which spread throughout the whole world which also gained him billions through all the paintings produced by the company
"Because of your charitable and kind nature you help millions of people and they thanked you for it which earned you massive amounts of positive karma only second to me" GOD said. - Lunis_Von_Archean2yrPosted
The author here personally it's one of my greatest ideas that came to mind and I would love to continue it but the updates will stay inconsistent starting from April 18, 2022 so please bear with me same for my other novel 'Godly Naruto System'. I can maybe squeeze in a chapter a day back and forth from my two novels but time will tell. I appreciate all the people who read my novel thanks for your support even if it's unconditional. You can comment here your questions or suggestions. Also here's my unofficial review of my story so far. Writing quality 4/5: Pretty standard but pretty easy to read and you can really know who is speaking and who it's speaking about only problem is that I'm not funny at all. Story development 5/5: It's slow generally speaking but I will try to speed it up. Character design: 3/5: Pretty bad at making kind characters well at least kind where you do not hate everybody. Updating stability: 4/5 Sometimes I upload 2 in a day when there is nothing to do but I generally update daily. World background: 5/5 The marvel universe what can I say. Anyway that's what I'm going to say for now goodbye.
- Lunis_Von_Archean2yrReplied to LycarusCh 1 Arrival
- Lunis_Von_Archean2yrReplied to LegendDairy
I didn't write that because I want focus more on the story not the back story and I already wrote 1,800+ words on that chapter
"Because of your charitable and kind nature you help millions of people and they thanked you for it which earned you massive amounts of positive karma only second to me" GOD said. - Lunis_Von_Archean2yrReplied to LegendDairy
A fallen angel to be exact
"I do now" Luke said.