realfan16

you already mentioned the grammar so not much to say and my review is sort of late but meh 🤷‍♂️ the concept and plot is intriguing as our mc plays the mysterious game ... a bit too mysterious if you asked me 😩those random tangents of what he did right after exiting the portal are evil teasers😭

💀well this also proves bro right in his decision to run from woman

decent name if a bit pompous

so ? what of it mortal?

I can't even describe the irony of reading this when there's a 'new' virus out there spread by rodents 🤦🏾‍♂️

🤣🤣🤣ha that's the spirit .no censorship

audacious author hein. .. tho i know u won't describe it know that i approve. some hardships like these most won't dare describe it but what's a bit of unpleasantness in the face of entertainment *evil laughter *

ugh cultivation realm names are such a chore to remember 😭 I especially hate it when author feels the need to describe the realms of everyone MC meets.

that's the principle behind wells, i fail to see your issue ?

This here is exactly why systems aren't worth the read . oh well i held out 🤷