Raj_Padhi

I find the story interesting for now. Have a read at it and decide whether or not it is worth following. No harsh opinions here.

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good build up.

good

Nice one

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That is a nice one

IT is a good introduction, although i did get a little bit of familiar vibes.

Nice work