Fine story for now.. Please continue the update frequency. This story has great potential.

i have been reading it up and the progression is good. i recommend reader give it a try since it might actually lead to something amazing.

me too

nice beginning

Good novel, but the author needs to update more frequently. If so, give it a try .

good one

Nice one

Kind of a different novel. Wrong kind of title though

I have read the story and Leon seem to have undergone a lot of trauma from a very early age. His calmness and ability to adapt to the situation was a bit acceptable and hence I am loving the progression of the story.

I love the progression of the story even more now that the scenes are growing at a much better pace, i hope the author is bale to continue his way of writing and show us much Better plotlines.

The novel is progressing in a very slow manner, but I find the details were good. Especially the first fight was quite descriptive and the fights which followed were also good.