alex_mack

I like the story so far would be great if you could add character images for the female characters

I just started reading this story and already caught all the way up to the latest chapters and I just have to say this is a really great story once you get to chapter 100 the story really starts to shoot off in a great direction I was especially shocked and how good the fight scenes were and how good the overall plot is this novels world seems really big and I can't wait for the story to Branch out the other parts of this world this is a really great story but if I had one critique it would be sometimes the writing quality dips some words are messed up I think you need to invest in an autocorrect app for some words but this isn't that big of a problem 98% of the story words are fine it's just the last 2% or somethings are messed up besides that there's really nothing wrong with this story it's my favorite cultivation novel right now next to dual cultivation I hope my review helps some people that want to read the story and I help the author keeps writing the story that's all I'll leave another review in the future though

I really like this story I hope you keep up the good work and keep writing

I just started reading this story I'm at chapter 10 and I don't hate the story I think it's pretty okay but the grammar sucks it's not the worst grammar I've ever read but in some places the words are either messed up or not properly used in the right context I hope you get a grammar or spell checker to fix the problem

please upload a new chapter please

this was an actual really good story are you going to continue or did you drop it

can we please get chapter updates

will there be a chapter update soon

when are we going to get a new chubby and can you make an upload schedule so I know when you're going to post

when are we going to go to chapter update