Daoist001rishi

Nice one.tThe author's writting is very neat.its a good story.The character development in the story is very good.I hope he update everyday.

A good novel with a high potential. It can be written upto 1000+ chapter. But i think the author doesn't want to write it anymore so he just concluded the entire novel in just 1-2 chapters.. It really is disappointing. But it was fun to read. I was hoping for more chapters. Anyway, we can't read the mind of the author. It was good but at the same time disappointing.

Language-Poor Story _ VERY poor This is just garbage writing. I am sorry if i am hurting your feelings, but i have to tell you its rubbish. The MC dont have a proper power level. And MC have lots of unwanted techniques like garbages thrown around the road. Its totally unorganised and its full of grammer and spelling mistake. Its frustrating to read.

Nice chapter by the way. Hope u update more.

Come on Author more chapter.. Its gooood,................. ... . . . . .............................................................. . .. .

This is one of the best fanfic i have read until now and i hope u write its next volume its has great potential. Good work Author 👍👍👍👏👏👏👏🥳🥳🥳