Thank you!

Hey, there was nothing wrong with what you said. Thanks for the pointers. I’ll make sure to change them. And the weird symbols are part of the story. Appreciate the feedback :D

Thank you!

I really like the writting style. It's simple and to the point, making it easy to undestand what's going. I also like that you describe the characters enough so that we can get a picture on how they look without dragging out the story with walls of text. Adding it to my library. :D

This story has a lot of potencial. I think that world buliding helps make the world feel alive and real. Keep up the good work and i'm excited to see the growth of your world and you as an author. :)