the author wrote a program for posting chapters, but it does not work correctly, and the author rarely checks it.

I write through translator. I meant that she imprisoned herself in books. It seems that what is written in the book is true. Plus She didn’t train, didn’t research, didn’t experiment with magic, preparation doesn’t count. In HP, magic is built on emotion and intention, rather than being confined to strict movements and words.

Another novel, there were only Minecraft, Fortnite, NfS.WoW.

No. It’s better when in another world, for example in tensur, this would be interesting either in Marv and DS or somewhere else.

It was good, but at one point everything went into ..... n t r, pregnancy, etc. For what? okay harem okay intimate for that there is Anko and others, not mothers Sakura and Ino

Not now, but the plot seems to show the possibility.

Honestly the story is cool, but it feels more like a good retelling than a full story. If you can’t write something well, you can use neural networks. From several options, collect one + edit. It will be good, and not like a conversation with Minato) And the idea is super, that’s why 4 stars. I am writing through a translator, there may be errors. Too lazy to edit later.

They could have at least edited it a little, rather than copying it from the MTL translation site with a link in the text, also some words were cut off due to hyphenation.

maybe so, but still, intelligence is also a talent. And if correctly, without her framework, she could implement it, then she could study the 7th course in 3 or 4, and then go further and higher, explore more and become strong. And in the end, dark magic drove her into the framework, no, no rituals, she forgot about alchemy, book god

We need an editor, we really need an editor, we need to clean up the Chinese words, then names or other names are replaced with Chinese ones every now and then.

Thank you for paying attention,

the part with the girl can be changed, otherwise it’s too offensive, she can also be moved to someone famous and there will be a good start for a romantic line

Ask to write a lot of synopsis chat gpt or another neural network. And take it out, combine it, or take it as a basis and write here what you liked. 1 I can’t judge from the first chapter, but so far it’s ok.

Already edited

very funny story, I laughed almost every chapter. It's interesting to see his meeting with Grindelwalt...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

the strongest is the otherworldly spiderman

Идея и сюжет хорош но реализация отстой.8 Osh..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

In the book she is called the most talented witch, and if she had not driven herself into the framework of the rules, she could have become stronger than Dumbledore

Tonks, Atronarch and Luna Love

The story is good but requires high-quality editing and removing Chinese motifs, they are not appropriate in Naruto.★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................