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so far I really like the book it's a couple of flaws that I don't like but I'm very impressed with this book with the first black characterI know it's not a big deal the most the yard but to a guy that read a lot of books and I mean a lot to family read a book with somebody that's black as the main character and going through the motions and ain't doing them dirtyonly problem I say with the book I got is the fact that he goes to the very ends of the Earth for his first love Choice which I'm not understanding because the girl hasn't done anything so far I'm a chapter 400 and somethingnow she say all the time how much she loved him but what has she done to show thatout of these 400 chapters I have read I say 300 of them are about the troubles that she brings so far and it's ongoingit's shocking the second girl he fell in love with will not mention the fact that she brings nothing but trouble and it's been very widely known that if her family makes her marry someone elseshe will marry them and justified in some form of Fashion on why she doing it for himthe first time her brother stabbed him almost in his heart and she convinced herself oh he wanted me to live so I'm going to marry him and live now the king son wanna which everybody in the world wanted for some strange reason but he won't

Are you kidding me? You guys know, for a fact? Miss Amy deserved to get him pregnated. And you guys voted no, he probably even touched the other girl, miss Amy is all-powerful being what do you got against powerful women? You guys really let me down, but I bet you guys are the main ones, Reno's novels where the guy gets 30 million wives and the pregnant all of them like that's realistic, all I was asking for was 2 women. Is that too much 2 women? That's it realistically 5 but 2 women. That's all. I wanted and yacht to that away from me so now.

man out of all the book i have read this is number 2 Vampire slice of life is number 1 I like the fact that he has a lot of love interest, but he knows that he is loyalty. Lies with Lil of any other body. Any other writer would have just made him make everybody. His girlfriend, everybody did he come across. Even the girl that he claimed to be his enemy. He would have put her in to the harem. So so yeah, you're doing a good job, bro. more r18 in im good keep Writing writing

am I the only one that noticed how they take these MCS from being dudes that can't get no girls to get in all the girls like it's just easy but I'm sorry most of the time you guys write these MCS getting all these women in real life if you had a girlfriend you will understand there's no way you can juggle all these women women need attention how would you give a woman that's one of the most spiteful creatures on Earth just food for thought when Writing your next book I like the fact how your MC builds a relationship with the women and don't have so many women. But you missed some of the sex scenes, bro.another thing that makes me so mad is how they try to be so sympathetic to every situation liked the foreman the they let everybody live man I hope his revenge is solid I haven't got to that part yet but if he ain't killing some shit I ain't going to be satisfied I ain't going to lie

read hero of darkness thats good writing

cap I guess hes the best writer in the world because he makes the main character loses his powers over and over

what I noticed about you as To an author you got a real Obsession about losing everything and trying to gain it back you didn't did this about 30 times in this book so far Really I stuck by you at the beginning because I'm like OKD right but man this man lost his power so many time Is so many different types of situations you just He just got done with this you monkeys fight just to find out his mama couldn't get all that by herself and still would have been able to beat the strongest duty couldn't be so it's like it was all for nothing now is mama gonna die all for nothing What the say like I thought you were a good writer I still do think you good rider but me

I don't know if I should call you a bad writer or a writer that at every cliche everything that people hate about books or storylines you added into all your books I have read the vampire system book in the dragon system book stop the vampire system book around $900 and something because I kept trying to give it more and more trials because the World building was good but if there's anything that people hate about a certain book other than harems all the other cliches like somebody that you know can't defeat something going on to do it 101 knowing if they going to get captured die and forced everybody else to run in those are the type of things that he writing to these books and that's why I say I don't know if I should call you a bad writer or just a cliche writer basically come up with some new ideas stop making it so obvious your plots are so obvious man that is so annoying that I invest so much time and reading your book just to see a good story turn into trash

slow down it getting to be to many women

So far 270 chapters in I have seen the most naive person the most self gratifying person in my life and I keep telling myself the stupidity of the character must be the stupidity of the writer because he thinks hes smart we're really got me to the point where I was like oh I'm done with the book was the suckers and I'm not talking about people I'm literally talking about lollipops when he made the decision to use the girl as bait I say how he handles this is going to determine if I keep reading the book and I'm guessing you guys can guess by reading instead he haven't been pretty bad b At this point I can just imagine how bad it's going to be when he actually start having sex with these women you cannot just brush over everything with oh I really let this happen to her see the man that's literally trying to rape your woman and just say oh we need to find out if someone is a bug film no obviously there is obviously you're not gonna get that's right but let's keep using her as bait until we find out who that person is even if he rapes her it's allright as long as we find out who that person is oh that's not worry about all the hundreds of other women that hes That this man already raped in the school let's not worry about that the writer wants you to get to the last moment where hes plan actually gets laid out people die and you cry because you feel like it's your fault when you could have stopped it at the beginning