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so far the height crazy like they've been hyping this book up for years I never read it because of the title not online to you I don't like books with you submissive mmc I saw the comment I said this guy understands from the perspective of a sidekick you make kill him at the end like I cannot understand why writers do this to the main character it does not make sense to me to kill them all right that's crazy to be honest I would like the story you felt like a bunch of stuff shelves then try to make it fit if that makes sense

it's kind of crazy to me that you defending the harem aspect as hard as you are I have not read a successful harem novel yet and I've read a lot of novels I mean a lot and no one has done it successful enough to be looking for harem novel they either feel the book up with a lot of sex in lose track of the story 90% of the time or they try to make the main character be one of those people that's oh they a figure it out and I'm just going to stand back here and watch it all play out that is not how it should go never or it's going to be a care to that every time a girl looks good he decides that she deserves to be in the harem so every girl that looks decent he's trying to pick her up and now he got a thousand women That's not realistic at all if you never had multiple women in your life or juggle multiple women then you will understand how that will never work but that's what majority of these authors do they write these books trying to live through them and never lived it I'm all for suggestions name me somebody that did it right and I'll give the book a read

I feel like the romantic aspect was perfect he didn't do too much he didn't do a little but what I would like to put out there is I don't think the the partner that they gave him which is Dana me personally I don't think she likes him like I feel like everybody around him found somebody that they can use to upgrade themselves and they just ran with it and he seems to not notice that everybody around him is using him lotus is a perfect example they even pointed it out themselves that said we keep her around by keep presenting her fluffy creatures to hug and and sleep with not in that way if if you thinking like she's one of those people that success with animals basically but like I say every time she talks to him it's in a condescending way it's never I don't know you got to read it to to really comprehend what I'm saying majority of everyone's around him is using him and I just feel like the Arthur could have did better with that The family aspect he never goes home he his family or poor and he's basically one of the richest people in their world at at a certain point of the story and he sends a couple of coins home where basically they went from being completely poor to middle class All the stuff that he invents to stop aging and to make your your skin look youthful they never mentioned that he sends any of that home his mom looks like a old woman that s on the brink of starvation that's exaggerated a little bit but I'm just saying never goes home is crazy what else I don't know bro it's just the story about a guy getting used by the world if you ask me and the only ones that really shows any entrance and like her is his animals and even they call him by his first name and and uses him like they have mentioned multiple times you need karl for upgrades

this book kept me reading no skips all way up until like a thousand I want to say a thousand fifty or a thousand hundred and the only reason I stop reading this book is because he started letting a guild multiple guilds basically take advantage of him and I'm just was waiting on the whole time for the writer to correct it but he never did and I'm just like you see them you writing what they're doing to him and you're not doing anything about it they just left me boggled because the rider was so good like bro to the point where I am reading his other book now but he never fixed it and it bothered me so much because I'm like you don't even need them that the other guilds they brought nothing to the table and he made that very clear when they set up the agreement they brought nothing to the table so I'm like why would you even all they offer you is interest to get to a dungeon that you can possibly access if he goes to his other members like it didn't make sense to me that's all they brought to the table was a dungeon and basically had him working like a Hebrew slave hey can you say that they might flag it I don't care f*** it but I was just so shocked it was a couple of other things I'm not going to sit here and lie I was a couple other things that bothered me basically the girl that he was dating Dana I don't really think she liked him she complained about him a lot and it was just taking as a joke but she complained a lot another person that did not bring anything to the table other than her company now that I say it out loud it seems to me everybody around him was just using them The main character like all of them was using him nobody really brought value to him other than him and it bothered me that through the whole book he tells you how he comes from the mind and how he grew up poor but not one time when he got strong did he go home and visit his mom and dad he wasn't treated poorly by his mother and father they mentioned one time that he sent money to them but he never goes back to visit them he never buys them a house in a better place All he says is what my dad got a promotion when I when I powered up and that's it The people that he traveled with when it made his parents but he never and that kind of bothered me because I'm like if you come from the bottom you should want to you know elevate your parents you know that's that's what I thought everybody would do but I guess not you know stuff like that just little stuff but I was super in tune to the book I'm talking about man waking up can't wait to finish reading the book type stuff but it was a lot of little things that I felt like could have been fixed but the writer never took the time to fix them

All I want to know is why he don't got the same energy for Lisa that he got for all the dudes and that that does something wrong in him why has Lisa not died you talking about this the best book you ever read you must ain't read no books cuz

there's no way that you guys can keep making these novels where the women does whatever they want to the main character and they stay alive you guys try your best to describe these women in the best way possible so you can justify the reason you keeping her alive so you can sleep with her there's no way no form of fashion Lisa should have stayed alive Lisa should have died the same energy he got for Bryce is the same energy he should have for Lisa Lisa tried to kill him multiple times you can sugarcoat it all you want to she tried to kill him and if someone tries to kill you what do you do you tried to kill them back but you guys refuse to kill off women that try to kill the main character because you want to sleep with them You're not physically sleeping with these women so I don't understand why do you want so bad for the main character too you making the book worser everybody that reads these books you get about two three different types of people One of those types of people is a virgin like most of the authors and they just love hearing sex scenes no one saying there's nothing wrong with sex scene I'm saying you guys go overboard with the r-rated scene it's like y'all don't know where to cut off at with them just do better bro do better like I understand a lot of people these B you guys first novels just every woman is not meant for the main character to sleep with her That's long story short

One thing that's my pet peeve about these type of books is I just don't understand how nobody ever picks up on how can a main character go from being a person that can't even talk to women let alone get some cat now becoming this magic dime wine as soon as he get a little power he he know how to talk to b****** he getting b****** left and right Man that's not realistic man that ain't realistic at all like come on folk you was a virgin this ain't no I died and reincarnated and got a different body type stick no he ain't the same body he had so it might have got some good looks even with the looks he wasn't pulling no women and if he was they was just on a they was you know lingering from a distance but now he just magic Don wine how does that even add up Make that matriculate

One thing that's my pet peeve about these type of books is I just don't understand how nobody ever picks up on how can a main character go from being a person that can't even talk to women let alone get some cat now becoming this magic dime wine as soon as he get a little power he he know how to talk to b****** he getting b****** left and right Man that's not realistic man that ain't realistic at all like come on folk you was a virgin this ain't no I died and reincarnated and got a different body type stick no he ain't the same body he had so it might have got some good looks even with the looks he wasn't pulling no women and if he was they was just on a they was you know lingering from a distance but now he just magic Don wine how does that even add up Make that matriculate

My wives are beautiful demons he ripped off your whole book like he stole everything out of your book you probably want to report him