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I'm happy you're improving and wish you and your story the best! :)

I enjoy when a story isn't rushed and when it's well written, and these certainly apply to this story. It is eloquently worded and it spends much time on describing the interactions between characters as well as the thoughts of the main character. These are both the book's greatest strenths and weaknesses in my opinion. To illustrate this I will write two lines essentially describing the same thing: -"He could not help but allow the lurking smile at the back of his mind grow on his face as he expressed the feeling his thoughts gave him" -"He smiled at the thought" I enjoy these lengthy descriptions... but not when the book is full of them. Most of the descriptions are like the first option, and I got tired of it pretty quickly. The phrase "could not help but" is also unnecessarily abused to an almost hilarious degree. While I certainly cannot fault the author on their english, I wish they would consider the time to use these dragged out ways to say things that could be short and concise. Which brings me to my second point, the pacing. Dear lord is the pacing slow, which I also enjoy at times, but only if we get some action in between. Those who have read the book may be thinking "wasn't the monster wave enough action?" and to that I say, it should have been half as lengthy and have more fighting rather than pointless dialogue. Also, the monsters are literally only described as that, 'monsters'. Nothing is said about how the regular monsters look in the first couple of chapters of the fight. I'd say, give the book a chance, those of the same opinion as me regarding pacing and language will quickly realize it isn't for them, and for the less picky, I believe you will enjoy it. It certainly isn't bad by any means, but I will not be reading more than 60 chapters of it. Hope you can take some of the criticism to heart and improve author, flaws aside I think you have a good story in you.

I agree, but that's besides the point I'm making

bruh, this is about as informative and constructive as the "EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP" reviews. If you don't know why you think the way you do, then don't spend your time making reviews

Hi author. I recently saw 'eveofchaos' give this story a reward thingy that pops up in my inbox. It looked mildly interesting so I read a couple of reviews to see if this is something I would enjoy. Seeing you accusing a reviewer of being a fake account doesn't really paint you- and by extension, the novel- in a particularly positive light. We readers have no idea if this is true or not, and I don't really know why you reply to it. I am of the opinion that if you are so convinced, just delete the review, and if not just leave it be. If you want to convince people that it's a fake account then you should probably make a better case for yourself. That's all, good luck with the book!

I return once again to continue of the cultivation path, dao of exp.

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Firstly, I believe that when the author is calling God a monster, he refers to how powerful he is, not that he is a monster in the sense that he is evil. Secondly, this is a fictional world so don't think too much about the similarities to ours.

If she's a 'bitxh' for being cold and detached, so is Bai Zemin lol.

Mixing imperial and metric units in the same sentence while describing the elephant beetle is kind of jarring