GATE_ASPIRANT

there IS A NEED TO DESIGN THE MAIN CHARECTER ABIT DEEPLY. while TEH AUTHOR IS AN EXOPERIENCED FELLOW, I WOULD LIKE TO SEE SOME MORE IN DEPTH FACTOR.

nice one

This is a nice build up for a story

It6 is noice

nice

update more frequently

I am going to stay with the story. waiting for the next story to come out

Give the story a try

A nice introduction. Let us hope that it would be as good as it is shown in the novel. I have high expectations from the writer.

Another dual character story from this writer. he is good at building the proper pathway.